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春韵十二首
草斋风凉
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 01:01:34    Post subject: 春韵十二首 Reply with quote


日色融和昼渐长,冰凌妩媚吐新黄。[冰凌花]
山居妙处聆天籁,满眼风光到北疆。

清明乍暖晚犹寒,小镇初融雪未干。
街上翩翩痴少女,已将夏韵作春衫。

东风化雨雨方疏,漫卷陈冰去竟无。
钓得江鱼和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶。

野旷天青草乍萌,轻身乘兴乐郊行。
山莺也会趋风雅,河畔先争婉转鸣。

错落新花缀野畦,蹁跹紫燕戏春泥。
悠然几缕炊烟淡,三两雏鸭过小溪。

松江倒影沐流霞,堤畔疏枝绽嫩芽。
课子归来无俗事,蓬舟醉倚伴渔家。

三春桃李竞芳菲,燕剪流云过翠微。
户外闲花知弄俏,幽香缕缕透窗帏。

细雨如丝过小桥,鹅黄上柳弄妖娆。
东君莫是知农事,也入池田理稻苗。

溪头置酒浴尘心,醉里倾怀岂独吟。
云卷云舒春恰好,山花点点竟沾襟。

小径幽深落日斜,东风眷顾野人家。
青山一脉连江碧,两两黄鹂数落花。
十一
草暗花明鸟韵轻,藤萝掩映弄余晴。
崖头凛凛松风浩,半入前坡作水声。
十二
春到蒲塘柳若烟,横舟醉卧草斋前。
垂丝静处聆山韵,几许尘思化蝶闲。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 13:13:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

釣得江魚和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶 --- 潇洒,风雅!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-09 23:24:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
釣得江魚和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶 --- 潇洒,风雅!


谢谢白云闲人吟友雅赏,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-10 11:32:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

春韵雅诗。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 02:22:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一派农家春色!能置身其间且能道出其撩人之美,缺审美者实难为之!欣赏!学习!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 23:37:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
春韵雅诗。


谢谢朋友支持,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 23:38:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
好一派农家春色!能置身其间且能道出其撩人之美,缺审美者实难为之!欣赏!学习!


谢黄洋界朋友高抬,问好了!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 19:41:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

春色,在小镇、山村、田野最能体现,也最能享受。欣赏先生的诗,问好了!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 20:47:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好。一组美妙的春歌,欣赏好诗。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 21:02:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

米运刚 wrote:
春色,在小镇、山村、田野最能体现,也最能享受。欣赏先生的诗,问好了!


谢谢先生雅赏,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 21:02:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
问好。一组美妙的春歌,欣赏好诗。


谢谢雅赏,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-19 06:26:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!欣赏佳句:钓得江鱼和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶。垂丝静处聆山韵,几许尘思化蝶闲。

立意潇洒;文笔飘逸!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-23 19:04:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
问好!欣赏佳句:钓得江鱼和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶。垂丝静处聆山韵,几许尘思化蝶闲。
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谢谢先生雅评,草斋问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-29 02:47:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

“钓得江鱼和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶。”“山莺也会趋风雅,河畔先争婉转鸣”“细雨如丝过小桥,鹅黄上柳弄妖娆。
东君莫是知农事,也入池田理稻苗。 ”“春到蒲塘柳若烟,横舟醉卧草斋前。 垂丝静处聆山韵,几许尘思化蝶闲。”画意足。无我之境。
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过尽晴川与雾海,未遭奇变是真人。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-29 20:14:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

金沙浪子 wrote:
“钓得江鱼和水煮,邀君何吝酒盈壶。”“山莺也会趋风雅,河畔先争婉转鸣”“细雨如丝过小桥,鹅黄上柳弄妖娆。
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谢谢金沙浪子细赏,草斋问好了!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-31 06:34:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

再读再赏,如:云卷云舒春恰好,山花点点竟沾襟。青山一脉连江碧,两两黄鹂数落花。课子归来无俗事,蓬舟醉倚伴渔家。
这些结句读来,齿颊留香,余音绕梁!顺问老师好!
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PostPosted: 2010-04-05 18:43:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
再读再赏,如:云卷云舒春恰好,山花点点竟沾襟。青山一脉连江碧,两两黄鹂数落花。课子归来无俗事,蓬舟醉倚伴渔家。青山一脉连江碧,两两黄鹂数落花。
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再谢笑聊兄评点,问好!
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