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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-07 16:37:58    Post subject: 抓拍 Reply with quote


摄影:张祖平

抓拍

(一)
幻化于蓝
你就是圣洁的爱神之岛

一座写意相识,一座
深藏相知,而这最后一座
掩埋着苦难
那些羁旅的脚印
因了伤痛, 每一步
都刻骨铭心

(二)
深秋之翔,于南岸
早春之落于北城
夏之交,于颈
不过衔起一颗心形的影像
惟有冬日
你零乱的羽毛散落为无根的大雪
灵魂呼喊着灵魂,相濡
于苍白的飞沫

(三)
太阳会醒的
春天也会醒的
那么冰雪?

醒来的冰雪就是一泻千里的河流
潜底?凌空?
那么那些活物?庄子说

相濡以沫,不如
相忘于江湖
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2010-03-07 21:46:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

(一)——想象得合理而美妙;
(二)——就图而展开的状情;
(三)——引入了庄子的思境。
问好白水——很放得开的配图诗!!
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根瑶
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PostPosted: 2010-03-07 22:06:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些羁旅的脚印
因了伤痛, 每一步
都刻骨铭心


有韵味的诗句!问好!
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江南雨
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 04:11:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

有韵味的诗句!问好!
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影沉寒水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 09:06:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

醒来的冰雪就是一泻千里的河流
潜底?凌空?
那么那些活物?

来学习好诗
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 22:01:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

深入而"诗"出,是功夫,更是境界.
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PostPosted: 2010-03-09 04:50:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵巧飘逸。很喜欢了~问好白白姊妹 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-03-09 07:47:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

哎。洁白的心。清水的情。离我很远的梦----
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-10 22:30:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好山城子,根瑶,雨,影沉寒水,吟啸徐行,一品红,韩少君。 最近读了两篇文章,为我们身边还存在这些忘我,真实的爱情所感动,写首小诗以记载这些美好的情愫吧。谢谢你们的理解和鼓励。
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子青
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PostPosted: 2010-03-11 00:15:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

羁旅之痛杂以情之大爱,归于老庄之境,学习并欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-11 00:45:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

进来学习,问候白水!!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 00:13:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

短诗歌越写越好了,问好白水,春天好.
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 03:40:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美~~
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 06:18:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

這個拍得很專業哦,并非普通抓拍。 Wink
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礼拜九
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 07:24:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!欣赏!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 09:22:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢子青,子花,湮雨朦朦, 红红,礼拜九的鼓励。


摄影:张祖平

戴玨好,你的眼光也够专业的,这位摄影师的确很专业。你看着三只天鹅的神态,第一只透着欣喜,第二只羞涩温情,第三只深沉眷恋,,,,,, Very Happy Very Happy
不由得就冒出了这几句:
(一)
幻化于蓝
你就是圣洁的爱神之岛

一座写意相识,一座
深藏相知,而这最后一座
掩埋着苦难
那些羁旅的脚印
因了伤痛, 每一步
都刻骨铭心
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 16:37:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水你好!把这组抓拍贴到《望天鹅》选稿栏,到时我连诗带画做封二用。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 04:15:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

我摘走了,不用移到选稿栏了。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 06:49:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习欣赏好诗!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 16:54:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

吴景慧 wrote:
我摘走了,不用移到选稿栏了。


谢谢景慧,我联系了摄影师,并得到他的许可使用这张照片。 网上这张像素太小,不适合用于印刷, 你何时需要请短讯告知E-mail 地址,我会给你上传原照。问好
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