田建勋
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 Posted: 2010-03-12 19:17:26 Post subject: 七绝*桃花 |
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盈盈春色嫩枝长，一点朱唇千载香。
昔日桃花今在否，可曾梦里忆刘郎？
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-03-12 21:03:27 Post subject: |
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"一点朱唇千载香",妙句!意象深长.
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影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 05:29:10 Post subject: |
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盈盈春色嫩枝长，一点朱唇千载香。
很棒
就是感觉三句转突然了
问好诗长
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 07:54:10 Post subject: |
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| "一点朱唇千载香",妙句!意象深长. |
与黄老师同感。
想起崔护的<题都城南庄>
去年今日此门中，人面桃花相映红。
人面不知何处去，桃花依旧笑春风 。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 17:44:04 Post subject: |
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结句意境悠长!
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君山楚女
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Joined: 09 Sep 2008
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Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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| Posted: 2010-03-13 18:49:51 Post subject: |
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可曾梦里忆刘郎？
可是刘郎去后栽？
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-14 18:43:38 Post subject: |
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[quote="田建勋"]盈盈春色嫩枝长，一点朱唇千载香。
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意境深远，学习好诗！ |
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