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咏花 --- (三)

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2010-03-10 10:54:10 Post subject: 咏花 --- (三)

杨花舞春风 <调寄天仙子> 缥缈暗香溢野林, 娓娓和风奏弦琴. 杨花宛转逐仙音! 一片片, 是春心, 輕吻行人飾粉襟. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2010-03-10 19:42:34 Post subject:

[quote="白云闲人"]杨花舞春风 ...[/quote] 读白云兄<杨花舞春风>,身心具在春风中荡漾.临屏即兴和七绝-春日：和风乱舞絮迷眸，艳媚阳光沐九州。山河叠翠鸥戏远，不及游人兴致稠。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-11 10:02:17 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄和诗! 再依韵和一首七绝: 起舞飞花风笛奏, 漫空宛转乐优悠. 芳郊更有多情處, 叠叠幽香伴醉讴! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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Posted: 2010-03-11 19:52:28 Post subject:

一片片, 是春心, 輕吻行人飾粉襟真是：春风有意度扬花，轻吻游人处处佳。问好白云兄！

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2010-03-11 22:23:30 Post subject:

春风惬意，杨花传情。

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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Posted: 2010-03-12 09:43:02 Post subject:

片片, 是春心杨花飞舞 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-12 13:16:47 Post subject:

謝笑聊兄点评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-12 13:18:05 Post subject:

謝庆宏雅评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-12 13:19:06 Post subject:

謝謝影沉寒水欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

君山楚女
秀才

Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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Posted: 2010-03-12 16:25:26 Post subject:

好个片片是春心，通读全词，余韵缭绕，清香浮动，赏心悦目！ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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Posted: 2010-03-12 21:12:17 Post subject:

白云春意畅,杨花舞春风!欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-13 17:39:26 Post subject:

謝君山兄雅評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-13 17:41:08 Post subject:

謝黄兄欣赏与点评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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