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踏遍青山快活人 ... <六>

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-02-19 11:42:51 Post subject: 踏遍青山快活人 ... <六>

* 古都雅典 * <调寄生查子> 古都两千年 , 举世闻名远 . 高踞立卫城 , 巴特农神殿 . 宏偉大剧場 , 雄視形巨扇 . 希腊史传奇 , 雅典娜之冕 . _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

月映春江
童生

Joined: 08 Feb 2010
Posts: 37
Location: 上海
月映春江Collection

Posted: 2010-02-20 00:07:09 Post subject:

读了先生的《古都雅典》及简介，便萌生去雅典一游的念头。好词！

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
影沉寒水Collection

Posted: 2010-02-20 06:18:12 Post subject:

雅典当是令人神往的地方 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-02-20 10:53:21 Post subject:

謝謝月映春江赏评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-02-20 11:00:16 Post subject:

謝謝影沉寒水! 雅典风光秀丽,旅游好去处! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

SLIU
秀才

Joined: 01 Jan 2010
Posts: 384

SLIUCollection

Posted: 2010-02-23 05:53:17 Post subject:

实乃悠闲，似白云任意舒卷，随兴游山川

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-02-23 09:51:40 Post subject:

謝謝sliu6的赏評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-03-03 06:32:13 Post subject:

看了白云兄不少系列诗词，真的有去描述的地方旅游的兴致。谢谢白云兄带来精神食粮！

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-03-03 10:52:57 Post subject:

笑聊兄,岁月匆匆过,人生宜隨兴! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

君山楚女
秀才

Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
君山楚女Collection

Posted: 2010-03-03 18:17:27 Post subject:

古都雅典，新词典雅。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-03-04 14:06:14 Post subject:

謝君山兄欣赏! 古都---新词; 雅典---典雅. 君山兄妙筆! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

SLIU
秀才

Joined: 01 Jan 2010
Posts: 384

SLIUCollection

Posted: 2010-03-05 07:36:26 Post subject:

足不出户随君走天涯

白云闲人
探花

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Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-03-05 10:46:19 Post subject:

謝sliu6赏评! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
探花

Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection

Posted: 2010-03-08 06:01:14 Post subject:

[quote="白云闲人"]笑聊兄,岁月匆匆过,人生宜隨兴![/quote] 重读白云兄词，忍不住想早日去观光、、、心情可以理解，不忙，先临屏和上一曲再说：桃源忆故人-雅典娜名城雅典勾游趣，一曲相思任吐。都晓巴特农处，举世闻名所。春风潇洒依花去，三月艳阳同聚。人道不须多语，还看明朝路。注：特，出律。因巴特农是名词，故任其出律。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2010-03-08 14:14:34 Post subject:

謝謝笑聊兄和词! 詞态优雅,潇洒风流! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

米运刚
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Posts: 918
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Posted: 2010-03-09 04:46:26 Post subject:

“古都雅典，新词典雅。”同意君山楚女评语。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-03-09 13:47:16 Post subject:

謝謝运刚欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2010-03-09 17:03:37 Post subject:

雅典城入词，典雅词似画。

白云闲人
探花

Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

白云闲人Collection

Posted: 2010-03-10 10:21:30 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏雅評! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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