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卜算子·相思（其一）

刘强
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Posted: 2010-03-09 06:19:42 Post subject: 卜算子·相思（其一）

花在不惜花，花去花仙岛。却道天涯多芳花，花倩花缥缈。今悔当惜花，无奈花期早。待到来年烂漫时，守住花枝老。

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Posted: 2010-03-09 07:32:09 Post subject:

却道天涯多芳花，出律了。观兄台五首词，唯其一这句出律。兄台或许指下误了。顺问好！

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