米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2010-03-09 05:07:27 Post subject: 江城子•新春遇李家翁媪 |
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江城子•新春遇李家翁媪
碧云知水水知春。醉东林，悦西坪。欢乐翁媪，牵手意盈盈。笑指发梢纸花俏，苍狗子，也开心？
身后童稚缀衣襟。步初停，忙拍门。爆竹声起，青燕戏流云。海外姑爷新返里，通宵语，热忱忱。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-09 05:40:47 Post subject: |
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| 米兄多日不见，出手就是好词！用词典雅、谐趣，人物个性鲜明。学习了。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2010-03-09 13:34:57 Post subject: |
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欢乐情怀溢于言表!
运刚多日不見,很忙吧.问好!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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影沉寒水
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Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2010-03-10 05:03:09 Post subject: |
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欢乐翁媪
全家大团圆
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诗无涯。思在线 |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2010-03-11 02:12:22 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢笑聊、白云、寒水三位兄台品评。 |
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王君明
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Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
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| Posted: 2010-03-21 07:29:10 Post subject: |
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米兄词作风味独特，拜赏。
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虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2010-03-21 21:38:53 Post subject: |
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家庭生活,写得如此温馨欢乐!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2010-03-23 18:20:56 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢王、黄二位先生雅评，一并问好！ |
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