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桃花,又见桃花(组诗)
子在川上曰
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 00:00:36    Post subject: 桃花,又见桃花(组诗) Reply with quote

文/子在川上曰

1、桃花,又见桃花

那个美丽的女子。
那个井边汲水的女子。
那个溪畔浣洗衣裳的女子。
那个说话轻轻 腰肢柔柔的女子。
那个牵着一缕炊烟 等你回家的女子。

化作了一阵风。

风过。
安坐在树梢。 她
朝我嫣然而笑。


2、一枝桃花和一些露珠

一些露珠 总是
习惯在梦里奔跑
黎明时分 轻吻我冰凉的唇
如雾般滑过我的睫毛

额头 一枝桃花 一点一点地
探出 见风而长 很快探出了窗户

站在窗外 你说 现在已是三月
一些缠绵的故事 从一本本书中
破茧而出 就为这抹惊艳的暗红


3、行走着的桃花

在你恍惚的片刻 一枝桃花
悄悄地长到了十八岁
在你的梦中渐渐丰满
某个早晨 突然绽放

大家高兴地嚷道 这就是春天呀!

春天了。
你喝了一点红酒
在一株桃树上婀娜地行走着
我的眸子里 你艳若桃花

(我把一坛酒 悄悄地埋在了
那株树下。)


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PostPosted: 2010-03-09 01:34:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

很沉着,提起来
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PostPosted: 2010-03-11 01:17:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友的品读,祝好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 05:34:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

在你恍惚的片刻 一枝桃花
悄悄地长到了十八岁
在你的梦中渐渐丰满
这样的写法很好,学习。问好。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-16 18:24:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些露珠 总是
习惯在梦里奔跑
黎明时分 轻吻我冰凉的唇
如雾般滑过我的睫毛

拜读,问好。
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