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眼波里游荡的春天（组诗）

万禹
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Posted: 2010-01-18 03:22:00 Post subject: 眼波里游荡的春天（组诗）

眼波里游荡的春天鸟巢栖落的夜晚风声回落的春天一转眼，就融化进那些雪里溪水流动的潺潺回音大地起伏的山峦梦想接近的翅膀山最近鸟最近歌声最近流窜进眼波游荡的春天春我踏着雪的脚印走到春的边缘聆听春天的脚步一步步临近春天和熙的风春姑娘那张俊俏的脸庞何时才能突显在大地温软的腹部我分明听到大地深处的那首歌 —— 春已来到花朵竞相开放蠕动的春天雪覆盖的大地噙满暗含的泪滴一个冬天储满的水分在春天融化浸染土地的芬芳深处一粒粒饱满的颗粒发芽深处一攒攒生动的力量钻出土地春天在蠕动脚印一攒攒向大地深处移动拥挤在某一个地方冬天已经走到更深处雪渐渐临近。大地的风声歌声窜动心跳集中于那些低洼和更深邃处风声更紧脚步是弥漫了一生的脚印蠕动的春天雪覆盖的大地噙满暗含的泪滴一个冬天储满的水分在春天融化浸染土地的芬芳深处一粒粒饱满的颗粒发芽深处一攒攒生动的力量钻出土地春天在蠕动通联地址：甘肃省张掖市高台县水务局家属院2号楼中单元202室 EMAIL：wanyouwen.good@163.com 邮编：734300 TL：15193411700 QQ：782462882 _________________ 我的博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1350725211

骨笛
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Posted: 2010-01-18 06:13:47 Post subject:

春天在蠕动 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2010-03-08 04:24:23 Post subject:

问好骨笛 _________________ 我的博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1350725211

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Posted: 2010-03-08 04:26:22 Post subject:

一粒粒饱满的颗粒发芽深处一攒攒生动的力量钻出土地春天在蠕动 _________________ 陕西姜华

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Posted: 2010-03-10 19:25:42 Post subject:

深处一粒粒饱满的颗粒发芽深处一攒攒生动的力量钻出土地春天在蠕动自然、流畅！不过有些诗人们较常写过的题材，可能会较难写出新意来，个人的猜测而已。

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Posted: 2010-03-12 01:50:53 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

一粒粒饱满的颗粒
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问好江南雨
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Posted: 2010-03-12 01:53:50 Post subject: 问好

根瑶 wrote:

深处
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谢谢根瑶的提议
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