戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383
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 Posted: 2010-03-06 03:41:48 Post subject: 思念 |
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我聽到子夜裡
有人把風當成皮球
用年輕的腳
踢開
然而月色必須出門，必須去面對
我的手把字拋高
高到無可奈何的地步
然後見它掉到井裡
噗通一聲
以為就此沉澱下來
它卻浮在水面一直盪漾著
直到我的眼睛
升起陽光
那時才又猛然想起
我在白天
你在黑夜 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2010-03-10 21:48:23 Post subject: |
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我聽到子夜裡
有人把風當成皮球
用年輕的腳
踢開
生动  |
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戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383
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| Posted: 2010-05-20 02:47:50 Post subject: |
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謝謝白水的點評
問好 |
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骨笛
秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547
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| Posted: 2010-05-20 03:20:28 Post subject: |
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噗通一聲, 才又猛然想起>>>奈何奈何 
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我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去 |
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叶英儿
秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006
Posts: 577
Location: 中国
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| Posted: 2010-05-20 03:39:42 Post subject: |
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| 好诗，灵秀。 |
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戀海
秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009
Posts: 383
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| Posted: 2010-05-22 04:55:04 Post subject: |
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| 骨笛 wrote: |
| 噗通一聲, 才又猛然想起>>>奈何奈何 |
問好骨笛
相思本無奈
卻又奈何之啊 |
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