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一剪梅梦回江南

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Posted: 2010-03-05 08:24:44 Post subject: 一剪梅梦回江南

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Posted: 2010-03-05 10:42:52 Post subject:

婉转,情意绵绵! 问好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-03-05 18:59:15 Post subject:

梦回江南婉约词。又见枫桥昨日船。。。七绝枫桥今泊（仄韵）乘风兰棹下姑苏，夜到枫桥寻古渡。名刹钟声千载情，当年渔火照今路。

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Posted: 2010-03-05 21:21:48 Post subject:

问好！有一段时日不见了。西江月-忆游枫桥临屏和一剪梅-梦回江南记得那年携手，枫桥指点春晖。桃红柳绿衬青槐，古刹依稀临绘。叹息时光不再，匆匆又过轮回。而今正值绿新偎，怎忍无辜忏悔。

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Posted: 2010-03-05 23:28:17 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

婉转,情意绵绵!
问好!

问好！谢谢赏评！

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Posted: 2010-03-05 23:30:39 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

梦回江南婉约词。
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谢谢qinghongh和诗。
余音绕梁，寓意深远！非常喜欢。收藏了！

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Posted: 2010-03-05 23:47:07 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好！有一段时日不见了。
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问好！笑聊好词谢谢相和最近先生才思泉涌佳作频出啊。

美景良辰情深深
泪过无痕印在心

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Posted: 2010-04-02 00:42:11 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

梦回江南婉约词。
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当年渔火照今路
昔日钟声荡新苏
水上乌篷飘摇过
岸边游人叹沉浮

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Posted: 2010-04-02 00:43:01 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

问好！有一段时日不见了。
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而今正直绿新依
一年一度又花期
风儿轻奏湖光曲
蝶儿翩舞李公堤

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Posted: 2010-04-02 03:30:58 Post subject:

[quote="sliu6"][quote="笑聊"]问好！有一段时日不见了。 ...[/quote] 而今正直绿新依 ...[/quote] 问好！接口依韵绝句再和：蝶儿翩舞李公堤，大好河山日日奇。独步刚刚春意早，回头已见柳花飞。

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Posted: 2010-04-03 00:12:05 Post subject:

谢谢相和！接：回头已见柳花飞扬扬洒洒花溪随点点桃红青枝缀梦里水乡映春晖

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Posted: 2010-04-03 05:52:50 Post subject:

[quote="sliu6"]谢谢相和！接： ...[/quote] 接口：梦里水乡映春晖，桃园游人喜上眉。去年桃花映人面，恰如梦中会此时。

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Posted: 2010-04-04 06:05:29 Post subject:

多谢，笔下生辉！

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Posted: 2010-04-05 03:26:28 Post subject:

[quote="sliu6"]多谢，笔下生辉！ [/quote] 谢谢sliu6赞评！

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