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三七

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Posted: 2010-03-03 09:41:19 Post subject: 三七

三七清晨露珠露珠露珠露珠列於葉子中軸正午點點點蒸發瓢蟲停葉上晚上蝸牛爬成北斗葉在底下吟詩 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2010-03-04 00:19:09 Post subject:

珠列於葉子中軸 ——珠/名词作壮语活用——真美！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2010-03-04 01:47:36 Post subject:

其上一行的尾字‘露’，可动词可名词，下一字如您所述。这是露珠一词的‘断词’修辞吧？这有点像猜谜, 三七, 一个意思是七粒露珠七星瓢虫北斗七星在一叶之间. 这诗的平仄是均衡的, 不知读来感觉如何? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2010-03-04 01:48:52 Post subject:

看看這個北斗, 像不像蝸牛? http://baike.baidu.com/view/83954.htm _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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