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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 23:58:58    Post subject: 《证据》/边井 Reply with quote

《证据》/边井

凌晨三点。一个女人和一只青蛙,在叫
然后是床,然后是肚子,风
从远处的黑暗中窜出,摇醒了窗帘
应该说是撕扯。纠缠不清的他们,一起
用布满老茧的臀部思考,关于下半生
一只蟑螂抬起头,露出一丝嘲讽
它用胡子,对明天的故事做了编排
一滴雨打在你的脸上,我醒了
其实我根本没睡过,没来过
没有生命,没有记忆,没有一支笔
这段文字留了下来,证明了这一切

2010年3月4日凌晨于床上
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 00:57:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

后现代的表达,
意识流的手法!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-16 22:41:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢您来评!^_^
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