成之
童生
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 Posted: 2010-02-28 06:24:30 Post subject: 踏莎行·元宵逛灯 |
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火树银花，夜空如昼，千秋风俗仍依旧。老妻悄语指街灯，当年曾约黄昏后。
谐趣萌生，蓦然回首，空空小巷人无有。对眸一笑忆山盟，海枯石烂同相守。
注：欧阳修《生查子》:“月上柳梢头，人约黄昏后。” 又，辛弃疾《青玉案》：“众里寻他千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在，灯火阑珊处。” |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2010-02-28 07:16:09 Post subject: |
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相濡以沫，天长地久。
元宵逛灯，真情共守。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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| Posted: 2010-02-28 13:45:39 Post subject: |
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对眸一笑忆山盟,当年曾約黄昏后,海枯石烂同相守 ... 佳节相忆,情真意厚!
佳节问好!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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成之
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Location: 中国大庆
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| Posted: 2010-03-02 04:27:55 Post subject: |
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| 多谢二版赏读，一并问好！ |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-03-03 07:23:43 Post subject: |
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| 用词谐趣，“老妻悄语指街灯，对眸一笑忆山盟。”欣赏兄台大作！ |
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