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踏莎行·元宵逛灯
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 06:24:30    Post subject: 踏莎行·元宵逛灯 Reply with quote

  火树银花,夜空如昼,千秋风俗仍依旧。老妻悄语指街灯,当年曾约黄昏后。
  谐趣萌生,蓦然回首,空空小巷人无有。对眸一笑忆山盟,海枯石烂同相守。

  注:欧阳修《生查子》:“月上柳梢头,人约黄昏后。” 又,辛弃疾《青玉案》:“众里寻他千百度,蓦然回首,那人却在,灯火阑珊处。”
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 07:16:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

相濡以沫,天长地久。
元宵逛灯,真情共守。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 13:45:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

对眸一笑忆山盟,当年曾約黄昏后,海枯石烂同相守 ... 佳节相忆,情真意厚!
佳节问好!
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成之
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 04:27:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢二版赏读,一并问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 07:23:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

用词谐趣,“老妻悄语指街灯,对眸一笑忆山盟。”欣赏兄台大作!
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