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秋之原色
白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 09:44:59    Post subject: 秋之原色 Reply with quote



摄影: 和平岛

秋之原色

用一把骨梳
梳理柔媚的阳光
如果秋风已凉
捧一掬海水复制迷幻的太阳
如果秋风已凉
如今, 天空的太阳何止
九个, 猎人啊
你可在张弓搭箭? 那么
请你拉弯胸膛
那根白骨
射落迷途的兔儿, 如果
秋风已凉

秋风已凉? 秋风
已凉!
瑟瑟秋风
卷起秋之原色
血红血红的
有人说那是漫天飘落的红枫
有人说那是海鸥折断的
翅膀, 我
却宁愿相信, 那是指尖
藏不住的伤痛
一点血色



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徐业华
秀才


Joined: 14 Mar 2007
Posts: 129
Location: 安徽
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 16:55:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗配好画,盖了帽了。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 20:13:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢盖帽,问好朋友. Very Happy
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王浥
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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Location: 中国广东肇庆
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 20:37:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

鹰的影子
被阳光抛在身后
阳光的影子
被海水掠夺

鹰展开鹏翅
欲寻一条光线暂栖
阳光润了脸蛋
用微笑惜别

岸在水之外
水在时间之外
双双顾盼拥抱的甜蜜
定格成瞬间永恒
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诗如生活,生活是诗!526020中国广东肇庆端州六路芙蓉西一街17号翠芙居705王晓辉
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王浥
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 20:43:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

鹰的影子
被阳光抛在身后
阳光的影子
被海水掠夺

鹰展开鹏翅
欲寻一条光线暂栖
阳光润了脸蛋
用微笑惜别

岸在水之外
水在时间之外
万物顾盼拥抱的秘密
只那么瞬间——永恒
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诗如生活,生活是诗!526020中国广东肇庆端州六路芙蓉西一街17号翠芙居705王晓辉
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杨光
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PostPosted: 2007-03-19 22:30:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

画,看了爽眼,诗读了爽心.
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 01:14:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨光 wrote:
画,看了爽眼,诗读了爽心.


问好杨光兄!
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yanxiao81
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 01:20:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

老大,油画一样的感觉啊!
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wangzi
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 12:41:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

令人感动的好诗.
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鲁绪刚
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PostPosted: 2007-03-20 22:57:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

精彩的画配诗,欣赏!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 05:07:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友和诗,问好

王浥 wrote:
鹰的影子
被阳光抛在身后
阳光的影子
被海水掠夺

鹰展开鹏翅
欲寻一条光线暂栖
阳光润了脸蛋
用微笑惜别

岸在水之外
水在时间之外
万物顾盼拥抱的秘密
只那么瞬间——永恒
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寒丁
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-03-22 16:28:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,后一节更有内蕴。

诗歌在一切不可能中呈现可能,当语言离现实越来越远。内心的景象便都穿透时间的骨髓,站立在你我的面前。“有人说那是海鸥折断的
翅膀/我/ 却宁愿相信, 那是指尖/藏不住的伤痛”。

问好白水,握!
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