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元宵佳節
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 14:15:35    Post subject: 元宵佳節 Reply with quote

* 元宵佳節 *

上元月下多情侶 ,
鶯語卿卿火樣郎 .
對對穿花痴彩蝶 ,
雙雙戲水醉鴛鴦 .

惜缘順意三生幸 ,
連理同心满苑芳 .
美景良辰堪賞識 ,
情真義重與天長 .
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 15:04:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

既是晚間,彩蝶、鴛鴦當是比喻情侶的姿態,只是這種天氣,在月下戲水似乎容易感冒。 Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 21:08:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

上阙写景,下阙写意。元宵度佳节,人间惜真情。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 21:13:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云兄!
月下,莺语,彩蝶,鸳鸯.勾织了元宵夜.用:多.火.痴.醉点缀,更显得夜色浪漫,生活美好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 21:53:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活气息浓厚,很感人。
南京的元宵节却是风雷雨电到齐了。

上元雨打灯,下水满街噌,
方便痴情侣,搂得花气蒸。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 22:31:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝戴玨点评!
月色如水洒满地,双双情侶似鸳鸯.卿卿我我笑嬉戲,沉醉佳节意情长!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 22:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝庆宏赏评!
祝欢渡佳节!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 22:38:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊欣赏!
元宵真是情侶們的浪漫時光!
佳节问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 22:43:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝君山兄和诗!
方便痴情侶,搂得花气蒸 ... 生动,情趣!
祝佳节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-01 04:48:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

元宵也是情人节

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PostPosted: 2010-03-01 15:07:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝影沉寒水欣赏!
元宵节是华夏情人节; 西方情人节今年刚好是华夏的大年初一!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 01:07:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

生查子-元宵和白云:

上午又天阴,傍晚阳光照。节日气氛浓,猜谜元宵闹。
热闹胜前年,叫卖声时吵。火树闪银花,笑语舒容俏。

注:想不到下午天气转好,到傍晚竟然露出晚霞。现在一轮明月高挂中天,耳中响声不断,天空时不时闪亮着火树银花。
今年元宵似往年,一派平安元宵夜!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-02 11:11:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝笑聊兄和詞!
天公喜作美,佳节耀晚霞.明月当空掛,伴火树銀花!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 07:18:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

自度曲-元宵再和:

七彩缤纷,火树银花耀,闪亮长空声震吵.年年今日,普天同乐好,嫦娥练袖元宵闹!

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PostPosted: 2010-03-03 11:15:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

和一曲:

柔情旖旎,红男綠女欢,影襯花街真羡人,岁岁此夜,痴情蝶恋花,吴刚醉捧桂花酒!

請笑纳!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-04 05:15:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云兄好和。笑聊收藏了,谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-04 14:09:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝笑聊兄!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 02:10:43    Post subject: To 白云闲人先生 Reply with quote

對對穿花痴彩蝶 ,
雙雙戲水醉鴛鴦 .

好一个浪漫的元宵佳节。
欣赏并问候。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 10:44:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

謝謝宁家珍欣赏!
問好!
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