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佟俊儿
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 05:32:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
月影过千秋
幽韵心中留
丽人阑珊处
劝君莫回眸
劝君莫回眸,花落水自收。
怡然千峰上,笑看万点舟。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 18:08:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

佟俊儿 wrote:
劝君莫回眸,花落水自收。
怡然千峰上,笑看万点舟。

冰轮天海泛扁舟,寸管梅签弄韵幽。
五彩花灯书意醉,三思诗性感怀收。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 19:24:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

叠韵和:
书海遨游一叶舟,墨香韵赋曲亦幽。
吟尽人间美好事,意怀思远目全收。
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佟俊儿
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 19:48:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
佟俊儿 wrote:
劝君莫回眸,花落水自收。
怡然千峰上,笑看万点舟。

冰轮天海泛扁舟,寸管梅签弄韵幽。
...
莹帘初动暗香幽,
雪舞冰魂入梦游。
一壶清茗过千岭,
对影古韵远烦忧。

元宵节快乐
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 20:08:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
叠韵和: 莹雪轻落江心舟,
墨韵淡描止水幽。
常向青天借五色,
泼尽真意情难收。...
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 20:09:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪轻落江心舟,
墨韵淡描止水幽。
常向青天借五色,
泼尽真意情难收。...
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 20:34:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝临屏叠前韵和:
七彩斑斓诗作舟,韵文千古路通幽。抒写人生康乐事,别样风情尽目收。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 23:39:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
叠韵和:
叠韵和:
书海遨游一叶舟,墨香韵赋曲亦幽。
吟尽人间美好事,意怀思远目全收。


叠韵回和:
美句新枫和韵酬,良宵古朴弄弦柔。
轻歌妙舞舒心意,好曲聆听自在呕。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-27 23:52:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

佟俊儿 wrote:
莹雪轻落江心舟,
...
佟俊鸿篇载诗舟,闲书巧语似溪流。
元宵节日添佳色,诉罢清词意尽收。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 00:01:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

佟俊儿 wrote:

莹帘初动暗香幽,
雪舞冰魂入梦游。
一壶清茗过千岭,
对影古韵远烦忧。

才俊胸怀笔底流,
童儿顽皮怎清幽。
今朝泼墨勤耕作,
去岁呕歌战美喉。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 00:33:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

换韵喽! Razz 来首词,声:上声十七筱十八巧十九皓去声十八啸十九效二十号通用。

点绛唇-元宵
又闹元宵,寒风冷面人欢笑。夜声更吵,竹爆烟花俏。
伏案挥毫,感叹华年好。新歌妙,弄清音调,搁笔明再聊。 Razz
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 00:49:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="莹雪"][quote="笑聊"]叠韵和:
叠韵和:
书海遨游一叶舟,墨香韵赋曲亦幽。
吟尽人间美好事,意怀思远目全收。
[/quote]

叠韵回和:
...[/quote]临屏依韵和:
好曲聆听自在酬,趣味有无敢起头。
青山依旧绵绵伏,黄河仍然浑浑秋。
春梅偷笑枝头俏,嫩柳随和心意稠。
毛诗咏后兴未减,齿颊三日余香留。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 01:23:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="莹雪"]换韵喽! Razz 来首词,声:上声十七筱十八巧十九皓去声十八啸十九效二十号通用。

[b]点绛唇-元宵[/b]
又闹元宵,寒风冷面人欢笑。夜声更吵,竹爆烟花俏。
...[/quote]
生查子-元宵临屏依韵填写:
上午又天阴,旁晚阳光照。节日气氛浓,猜谜元宵闹。
热闹胜前年,叫卖声时吵。火树闪银花,笑语舒容俏。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 03:53:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

送笑聊一首(俊儿是我笔名,我常用网名,雪舞梅香)

笑 梅 挑灯观焰潮,
聊 送 幽情雪即消。
吉 元 滚滚人安乐,
祥 宵 融融暖春苗。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 03:55:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

焰火耀云宵,街满欢笑。金盘已挂柳树梢,汤元正好。

梅影摇红,谜声正闹,且看银丝万千处,枫红北美俏。

(因懒于看平仄,故做自度词一首》


祝愿大家元宵节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 04:22:29    Post subject: 个人国画作品祝大家节日快乐! Reply with quote






不知道该发到哪里,地形不熟,若发错了,麻烦版主帮搬下家。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 05:33:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="佟俊儿"]送笑聊一首(俊儿是我笔名,我常用网名,雪舞梅香)
...[/quote]依韵随意和:
梅 笑春风绿意潮,
香 聊万里任逍遥。
如 恭如敬元宵夜,
意 贺年年醉今霄。
问好老朋友-雪舞梅香!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 06:34:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
佟俊儿 wrote:
送笑聊一首(俊儿是我笔名,我常用网名,雪舞梅香)
...
依韵随意和:
...
是啊,老朋友了,只是梅香很久不在江湖飘了,呵呵。问候老朋友,祝愿开心快乐!我不写古体诗好久好久了,依旧是不改不管平仄的臭毛病,呵,别笑我懒
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 07:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="佟俊儿"][quote="笑聊"][quote="佟俊儿"]送笑聊一首(俊儿是我笔名,我常用网名,雪舞梅香)
...[/quote]依韵随意和:
...[/quote]是啊,老朋友了,只是梅香很久不在江湖飘了,呵呵。问候老朋友,祝愿开心快乐!我不写古体诗好久好久了,依旧是不改不管平仄的臭毛病,呵,别笑我懒[/quote]

别客气,共同学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-28 21:58:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

自度曲-元宵
七彩缤纷,火树银花耀,闪亮长空声震吵.年年今日,普天同乐好,嫦娥练袖元宵闹!
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