冷巉
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 Posted: 2010-02-17 18:59:53 Post subject: 感谢和平岛写给冷巉的诗 |
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《哑巴说话》
和平岛 15:01:26
哑巴只会写诗，写诗好呀
写诗不用嘴巴
甚至不用笔
哑巴只会敲，写诗好呀
敲大地，大地就苏醒过来
敲江水，春天就降临了江南
我说生日快乐，生日快乐
哑巴哪个笑呀
笑得就像刚刚绽开的那一朵鲜花
《春天的花又要开了》
我又要看她们一朵一朵的放开自己
我真想折上一朵
送你
哪一朵呢哪一朵，朵朵都那么像你
当我想到这里
春天的花又要开了
写于加拿大
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2010-02-17 19:15:12 Post subject: |
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谢谢韩老师，还是有个老师好，老师新年好~~
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| Posted: 2010-02-17 20:07:53 Post subject: |
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冷巉生日快乐
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2010-02-17 20:15:28 Post subject: |
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万里之外的哑巴祝岛新春快乐~~
只是你笑坏我了，换个头像也不说一声
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荷梦
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| Posted: 2010-02-19 02:34:03 Post subject: ， |
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冷巉生日快乐
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原来是你的生日？
生日快乐！ |
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| Posted: 2010-02-19 03:43:07 Post subject: |
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岛主写的好。虎年好
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| Posted: 2010-02-21 00:49:09 Post subject: |
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2010-02-25 10:27:19 Post subject: |
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| 荷梦 wrote: |
| hepingdao wrote: |
冷巉生日快乐
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原来是你的生日？
生日快乐！ |
谢谢荷梦。
春天好。
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2010-02-25 19:06:56 Post subject: |
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冷巉不会是哑巴吧？我听见你春天的声音了喃？
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| 真的嘛 |
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| Posted: 2010-03-18 09:42:19 Post subject: |
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| William Zhou周道模 wrote: |
| 冷巉不会是哑巴吧？我听见你春天的声音了喃？ |
原谅俺也好奇了
听到轻快之音~~
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| Posted: 2010-03-18 14:13:26 Post subject: |
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和岛写的？跟以前风格很不一样了啊
小冷同学生日快乐啊！ |
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 01:11:52 Post subject: |
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| 生日呀！！迟来的祝福了！！！ |
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| Posted: 2010-03-20 03:37:30 Post subject: |
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| 写得不错，问好！ |
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2010-03-21 00:29:21 Post subject: |
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好感动，一并感谢楼上所有的朋友们，哑巴掉泪了~~
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