宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-02-23 07:06:20 Post subject: 一七令·诗 |
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一七令·诗(词林正韵)
文/宁家珍
诗,
文简,韵依。
音调美,语言齐。
能度欢日,亦消闷时。
感人间冷暖,伤世道愁悲。
笔下深邃意境,笺中缱绻情思。
常温李杜华章句,日久不难吟妙词。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-02-23 09:18:35 Post subject: |
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笔下深邃意境,毫間缱绻情思. 好句欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2010-02-23 20:59:46 Post subject: To 白云闲人 |
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谢谢白云闲人老师的品读,望提宝贵意见 。握手。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-02-24 04:54:10 Post subject: |
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有趣的诗歌形式 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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