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qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-17 11:34:34 Post subject:

婉曲入心柔，江天一眼收。新春诚寄语，网络友情留。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-02-17 16:10:31 Post subject:

网络友情留, 诗声遍五洲. 新年祝朋友, 欢乐渡春秋. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

博弈
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Posted: 2010-02-17 17:29:00 Post subject:

炮制一个乐渡几春秋新乡野韭油出城风访柳客已至东楼 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-18 17:52:47 Post subject:

客已至东楼，雪推朱帘羞。纤纤梅影落，袅袅茶香流。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-18 17:55:25 Post subject:

不知接的对不，新来的，多指教！

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-18 22:11:24 Post subject:

袅袅茶香流泊泊载轻舟半盏云中月朦胧影娇羞

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-18 22:31:28 Post subject:

淡淡影娇羞，云天接海流。银屏词赋曲，诗友解乡愁。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-18 23:26:54 Post subject:

诗友解乡愁，网缘情悠悠。平仄见真意，古今任遨游。呵，打油了

君山楚女
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Posted: 2010-02-19 02:47:09 Post subject:

墨客出口七步诗，莽汉修心一字师。春节情人偶牵手，正值双虎抱羊时。向各位师、兄、友拜年了！祝大家六六大顺，七星高照，八面来财，对酒放歌，实实生辉！ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

君山楚女
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Posted: 2010-02-19 02:55:45 Post subject:

接佟俊儿之末句：古今任遨游，一网解春秋。谁会凭栏意，鼠标光的溜。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-19 03:03:39 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

墨客出口七步诗，
...

正值双虎抱羊时，
君山客作百家诗。
楚女挥毫泼重墨，
北美枫暖红袖痴。
呵呵，问候楚女

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-19 03:08:56 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

接佟俊儿之末句：
...

鼠标光的溜，
一线解千愁。
屏对相思浅，
键落满湖秋。

呵，对完了，画画去了

SLIU
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Posted: 2010-02-20 08:32:43 Post subject:

键落满湖秋云烟绕汀洲思绪如流水朦朦月似钩

君山楚女
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Posted: 2010-02-21 05:56:28 Post subject:

朦朦月似钩，点点灯如豆；秦淮润万家，眼底谁看透？ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-22 05:25:48 Post subject:

眼底谁看透？花前青鸟走。弯弓出满月，止水入渊薮。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-22 11:23:15 Post subject:

佟俊儿 wrote:

眼底谁看透？
花前青鸟走。
弯弓出满月，
止水入渊薮。

薮(sou):生长着很多草的湖泽：薮泽。人或物聚集的地方：渊薮。

佟俊儿
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Posted: 2010-02-22 15:24:00 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

佟俊儿 wrote:

眼底谁看透？
花前青鸟走。
弯弓出满月，
止水入渊薮。

薮(sou):生长着很多草的湖泽：薮泽。人或物聚集的地方：渊薮。

是这个意思啊，用错了吗？请指教

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-02-22 21:55:30 Post subject:

佟俊儿 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

佟俊儿 wrote:

眼底谁看透？
花前青鸟走。
弯弓出满月，
止水入渊薮。

薮(sou):生长着很多草的湖泽：薮泽。人或物聚集的地方：渊薮。

是这个意思啊，用错了吗？请指教

没有错，很好。只是为其他人注解一下，方便大家。

佟俊儿
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Joined: 18 Feb 2010
Posts: 34

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Posted: 2010-02-23 05:06:28 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

佟俊儿 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

佟俊儿 wrote:

眼底谁看透？
花前青鸟走。
弯弓出满月，
止水入渊薮。

薮(sou):生长着很多草的湖泽：薮泽。人或物聚集的地方：渊薮。

是这个意思啊，用错了吗？请指教

没有错，很好。只是为其他人注解一下，方便大家。

都没人接，一点儿也不好玩，我还是去画我的画去了。谢谢你回我的话。一天快乐哦

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-23 07:00:18 Post subject:

接上：止水归渊薮，风流逐浪走。妙手摘星来，枫园叶红透。

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