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会行走的树（外一首）

情巅大僧
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Posted: 2010-02-18 21:26:24 Post subject: 会行走的树（外一首）

《会行走的树》（外一首）那个时候树行走在人们的肩上无论把他安放在山坡或者公园或者路边他都是快乐的那个时候阳光温暖他的枝杆春风触摸他的嫩芽甚至小鸟用脚爪挠他痒痒他都是快乐的我在他的荫影里玩耍，成长这么多年无论天多黑，地多寒我几乎看不到他的忧伤他都是快乐的直到有一天清晨树再一次行走在人们的肩头走出村庄的尽头他还是快乐的可我的心却一下酸到了泪流因为他就是我的祖父一棵在尘世间行走的树《月亮的背影》月亮走了，只给我一个小小的背影她就象一个徇情的女子衣角掀起的寒风，义无反顾地吞噬了我躯体里积蓄了一个夏季的热量月亮走了，一个寒季才刚刚开始死亡的阴影悄无声息在月亮的背影里或生或死我都无法将铭刻在心的伤痕抹去 2010年1月5日 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1617043603

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-18 21:49:49 Post subject:

月有阴晴圆缺，人有悲欢离合

情巅大僧
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Posted: 2010-02-19 18:59:31 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

月有阴晴圆缺，人有悲欢离合

谢谢白水老师，新年快乐
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阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2010-02-20 02:52:42 Post subject:

可我的心却一下酸到了泪流因为他就是我的祖父一棵在尘世间行走的树借此怀念我故去的亲人~~~问好! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2010-02-22 00:46:46 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

可我的心却一下酸到了泪流
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谢谢，并问好
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2010-02-22 07:53:11 Post subject:

第一首看过结尾，再返回去读会觉得妙。前后在人们肩头的对照完成了一个人的生和死~

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