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哥特花-EpicaMV:solitary ground
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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 14:18:59    Post subject: 哥特花-EpicaMV:solitary ground Reply with quote

哥特花
-EpicaMV:solitary ground

我躺在梦境沙漠的大树下
午后的阳光亲吻我的乳房
大树的阴影让我安详
死神轻轻对我说-
你应该唱一首告别的歌


于是我张开眼-

那时我是爱眺望的小女孩
戴冠冕的奶奶在云端赐给我一块带着永远赐福标记的石头
可它却成为我成长路上的累赘
我在沙漠挖一个洞把它深深埋下
从此我轻装上路

在以后的日子
我常常看着自己张开的手掌
那里是一无所有


我的黑裙在云天飘摇
我的媚眼飞飞
蛇形的舌尖吐出了欲望的张扬

如今死神来娶我
我真的不愿告诉你
其实我一点都不后悔
其实我是多么地充满期待
而你

看到了吗
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PostPosted: 2010-02-16 10:37:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

比起之前的那首哥特花,这首十分精彩。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-19 12:02:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

有味道。这首诗和你其它诗的感觉不一样
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