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等(之一) 等(之二)
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PostPosted: 2010-02-11 18:19:32    Post subject: 等(之一) 等(之二) Reply with quote

等(之一)
这是一种幸福的颤抖,
风做客在夕阳与云的约会里。
那一片红红的花朵,
摇漾着一种深沉的期待。

感动水面呈现绯红的涟滟,
有一颗心走出驱体。
点着草径尽头垂柳的依依,
慢慢扩大周围的等待。




等(之二)
心躺在床上,
感觉放在屋里。
有一种情绪绵绵的环境,
和谐着外面的世界。

下雨了,这也有一种好处,
让人更领会家的味道。
你说你要来的,
让人暖洋洋地期待。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-11 21:31:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

好美啊!交代得更清楚些会更好的,你完全可以做到。




新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-12 06:35:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人暖洋洋的期待
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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 04:24:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

回金金
谢谢你的感觉,问好朋友。 祝你新年快乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 04:27:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

方塘半亩
谢谢你的赏读,问好。 祝你新年快乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 03:01:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

你等一个人~
而这个世界在等你~~

暖洋洋的诗~~
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 20:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

回安红红
没那么伟大。谢谢你的感觉,祝你新年快乐。
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