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〖金金作品〗走在运河堤上
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PostPosted: 2010-02-11 21:47:16    Post subject: 〖金金作品〗走在运河堤上 Reply with quote

《走在运河堤上》

走在运河堤上,寒风扯开插入天的屏障
走在运河堤上,岁末残留的小草半枯地伏在地上
我说不出今天是阴是晴抑或各有一半
天上的云,对岸的荒芜的大堤
其中的,是寒风里裹着的天

我来到一个渡口,下洼里的冷能昏迷意识
在渡船上,两个船工努力一次次拉着船的钢条
我被风打乱了头发,凉意到了骨头里
然而,我仍不是风的一部分
我希望的是呼吸到一口向日葵的温暖草香
我是自己,纵然风吹得我麻木
我是自己,看着河中波纹与船工共渡河的自己

造物的巨大,可称作是伟大,云俯在平原天上
冬天尘土飘扬在夹杂砾石的弯路上
散在风的身体里,也不是风的一部分
是空阔世界与寒冷的一部分
就算是寒心的一部分
可算是那条弯弯地不成样子的破败的路的

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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 00:22:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗路开阔,问好
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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 10:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金的诗歌越来越成熟, 希望读到更多。

问好新年
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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 19:26:55    Post subject: 问候 Reply with quote

问候金金。新春快乐!朝气蓬勃!!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 21:38:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

春节快乐!!!!情人节快乐!!!!诗好啊!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 22:15:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗友们新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-13 23:31:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

那条路延伸很长很长。。。春节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 01:09:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的诗歌资料库很好

尤其中外诗人的照片 将来有时间我会一一收藏的

可惜不能一次完成


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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 03:06:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

我希望的是呼吸到一口向日葵的温暖草香
我是自己,纵然风吹得我麻木
我是自己,看着河中波纹与船工共渡河的自己

金金,越来越喜欢你的诗歌了,祝春节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-14 04:30:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

有诗情,有诗意。问好。 祝你新年快乐。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-15 02:59:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

新年快乐~~

悲天悯人~也是悯自已~~
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PostPosted: 2010-02-17 00:03:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

把这首诗歌发到期刊的“无界采风”栏目
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