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白水
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Posted: 2010-02-05 06:22:29 Post subject: 舍利子

舍利子该收场了这些灵动的皮影。好想知道，如果真的立于格林威治界点是否还会遗憾，几多矜持和轻狂未及上演？遗落的脚印勾画着一个个魔圈你无法逾越，必需充填的皮囊，马斯洛终极的塔尖看着这扇小窗，看着这双凹陷的眼睛黝黑的隐藏着几多不曾说出的往事而这血红，是昨夜死去的火鸟不知是否正往天堂赶？他们一直就这么睁着看飞雪，看大风，也看这些模糊的剪影---想必应该是最完美的那些该恨不敢的恨，该爱不敢的爱，该骂不敢的骂，那些走马灯似的轮回，难道真的将为生命画一个完美的句号么？慢慢地阖上眼帘，你知道这一定是累了。慢慢地忘却，把阳光埋进深夜把痛楚埋进梦幻有人说人生不过是一个化妆舞会而你却静静地坐化于莲花, 点数水面的雨滴一个圆圈，又一个圆圈，，，，，，

安红红
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Posted: 2010-02-05 07:40:10 Post subject:

任何开始都是结束的过程~~任何结束都是另一个开始~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-05 19:29:02 Post subject:

问好红红，很久没读到你的诗歌了。

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-02-05 19:32:18 Post subject:

我一直在画圆圈，并留一点点的遗憾 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-05 19:43:52 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

我一直在画圆圈，并留一点点的遗憾
Very Happy

你画什么圈？风火轮 Wink

说正经事，图片找到了吗？

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Posted: 2010-02-05 20:05:36 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

我一直在画圆圈，并留一点点的遗憾
:D

你画什么圈？风火轮 :wink:
...

没找到
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2010-02-05 21:56:30 Post subject:

很美的意境，一句一句细读下来，竟然仿佛看到～～～睁眼，闭眼，我们看到了什么？？ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-06 08:48:12 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

很美的意境，一句一句细读下来，竟然仿佛看到～～～
...

谢谢喜欢。问好

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Posted: 2010-02-07 13:54:00 Post subject:

那些该恨不敢的恨，该爱不敢的爱，该骂不敢的骂好嚴重! _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-07 15:13:26 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

那些该恨不敢的恨，该爱不敢的爱，该骂
不敢的骂

好嚴重! Laughing

是吗？看来还得修练。 Very Happy

博士，想问如果你看见某个小科长点头哈腰的忙着给那位他不喜欢小处长点烟的镜头，会说什么？我最想做的事就是给自己点一根摩尔，吐两个烟圈（如果我会抽烟的话） Wink

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Posted: 2010-02-08 14:10:26 Post subject:

说穿了，舍利。地球其实除了太空人丢在外头的垃圾，物质不灭，什么也没少，可能还多了扔进来的些陨石。小科长想毒死小处长罢了，一边毒一边想着升迁。要抽烟，要等心情好的时候，免得伤身。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2010-02-08 21:16:39 Post subject:

有人说人生不过是一个化妆舞会而你却静静地坐化于莲花, 点数水面的雨滴一个圆圈，又一个圆圈，，，，，，结尾的画面缓解了前面是个的硬度。非常好，这首，有对生命的质询~ 问候白水，春节回家，提前给你拜个年，新春快乐，身体健康，万事如意！呵呵，很老套吧~ 抱抱！

金金
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Posted: 2010-02-11 09:48:53 Post subject:

用力写，你是最棒的！新年快乐！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-13 09:48:57 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

说穿了，舍利。

地球其实除了太空人丢在外头的垃圾，物质不灭，
什么也没少，可能还多了扔进来的些陨石。

小科长想毒死小处长罢了，一边毒一边想着升迁。
要抽烟，要等心情好的时候，免得伤身。
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说穿了，舍利。没错 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-13 09:52:34 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

有人说人生不过是一个化妆舞会
而你却静静地
坐化于莲花, 点数水面的雨滴
一个圆圈，又一个
圆圈，，，，，，

结尾的画面缓解了前面是个的硬度。非常好，这首，有对生命的质询~

问候白水，春节回家，提前给你拜个年，新春快乐，身体健康，万事如意！呵呵，很老套吧~ Very Happy 抱抱
...

！

问好明月，最近瞎忙，未及看帖，迟复见谅。也祝你新春愉快。

白水
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Posted: 2010-02-13 09:55:59 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

用力写，你是最棒的！

新年快乐！

问好金金，新年新作多多。

湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2010-02-15 06:47:11 Post subject:

喜欢的诗歌,问好.

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Posted: 2010-02-16 20:54:19 Post subject:

问候白水，新春快乐，身体健康，万事如意！ _________________ 陕西姜华

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