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七律-自嘲临屏依韵和玉儿

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-03 03:11:30 Post subject: 七律-自嘲临屏依韵和玉儿

（原创）七律-自嘲临屏依韵和玉儿文化·原创 2009-12-18 文/笑聊壮志曾经笑冷风，如今万事已成空。早衰鬓发身憔悴，未老雄心影苦穷。恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东。人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。附玉儿原玉：纵览群山啸冷风，恣情无碍任独行。常觉宇宙弹丸小，倍感人生壮志宏。笑里神托星万斗，梦中情醉月一盅。苍天从不怜娇弱，热血凌霄事乃成。新韵

李盈枝
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Posted: 2010-02-03 09:04:42 Post subject:

【032】笑聊卜算子•思友不想又常思，想却添烦恼。君貌时时脑海浮，刻刻心头绕。翠柳舞春风，花艳蜂儿笑。与子鸡湖畔上行，至此情难了。注：鸡湖，金鸡湖。位于苏州市东郊。 09.11.19于厦门卜算子•春游（此词话游以铭君）漫步曲径中，执手鸡湖路。柳绿桃红入眼来，一派春光注。碧水浅鱼游，又见蜂寻舞。最美人间画与词，千万和君住。醉花阴•季春碧阙晴空风步缓。新燕双双返。喃语了知之：无限春光，又恐花期短。亭台醉卧酣声坦。垂柳蝶嬉远。叠翠染山河，莫道消魂，更比芙蓉畔。七绝•江南冬、夏月夜二首和云闲水远《江南月夜》 (一) 小河古道吠声微，村落寒灯闪欲飞。凛冽西风如刀刮，玉蟾寂静照人归。 (二) 蛙声远近夜临知，辉洒荷塘满腹诗。折扇轻摇闲意在，抬头仰望月星痴。七律•自嘲临屏依韵和玉儿壮志曾经笑冷风，如今万事已成空。早衰鬓发身憔悴，未老雄心影苦穷。恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东。人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。笑聊，江苏无锡。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-02-03 09:55:25 Post subject:

恣意逍遥观宦海,隨情自在步篱東. 洒脱!看透人生如幻海,淡然处之自在從. _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-02-03 11:25:39 Post subject:

观宦海，多感慨。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-03 20:25:04 Post subject:

[quote="白云闲人"]恣意逍遥观宦海,隨情自在步篱東. 洒脱!看透人生如幻海,淡然处之自在從.[/quote] 问好白兄!谢兄雅评!

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-03 20:26:35 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]观宦海，多感慨。[/quote] 问好庆宏兄!不提宦海也罢.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-03 20:28:49 Post subject:

问好李前辈!谢谢荐读!

米运刚
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Posted: 2010-02-04 07:02:34 Post subject:

“人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。”佳句！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-04 18:48:58 Post subject:

[quote="米运刚"]“人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。”佳句！[/quote] 谢谢米兄赏读,雅评!

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Posted: 2010-02-04 21:36:40 Post subject:

欣赏！ “恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东。”好句！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-05 00:39:19 Post subject:

[quote="老山"]欣赏！ “恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东。”好句！[/quote] 问好老山兄!谢谢兄台雅评!

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Posted: 2010-02-07 09:51:55 Post subject:

恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功 ——欣赏，学习！ _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒

寒江雪影
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Posted: 2010-02-07 10:31:39 Post subject:

"人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。" 言有盡而意味無窮。 _________________ "課虛無以責有, 叩寂寞而求音。"

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-07 21:38:13 Post subject:

[quote="lulu"]恣意逍遥观宦海，随情自在步篱东 ...[/quote] 谢谢lulu赏读！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-07 21:42:01 Post subject:

[quote="寒江雪影"]"人生不过烟云幻，可惜时常用错功。" 言有盡而意味無窮。[/quote] 感谢寒江雪影兄点评：“言有尽而意味无穷”！

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Posted: 2010-02-11 18:40:38 Post subject: 问好

祝笑聊先生虎年大吉，万事胜意！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-11 18:59:46 Post subject:

[quote="月映春江"]祝笑聊先生虎年大吉，万事胜意！[/quote] 问月映春江先生好！祝月映春江先生春节快乐，吉祥如意！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-02-11 19:00:24 Post subject:

[quote="月映春江"]祝笑聊先生虎年大吉，万事胜意！[/quote] 问月映春江先生好！祝月映春江先生春节快乐，吉祥如意！

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