Maple Review Home
   Chinese Literature Society of North America | Maple Review | Immigrants in Canada | Angel Studio | The Driftwood Artist Society | Ocean of Poetry | Island of Music
"HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007. 		  
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister  ProfileProfile    Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Sign inSign in   BlogsBlogs    Weblogs NewsWeblogs News   AlbumAlbum 
English Home Bilingual Home Chinese Home
Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌 Post new topic   Reply to topic
火车，火车
晴天雨天
秀才


Joined: 20 Jan 2010
Posts: 213
Location: 杭州
晴天雨天Collection
PostPosted: 2010-02-07 08:43:16    Post subject: 火车，火车 Reply with quote
火车，火车

问你
你这铁的怪兽
你运来货物千万
为何忘了捎来她
相思的信
_________________
得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
根瑶
秀才


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 106

根瑶Collection
PostPosted: 2010-02-07 21:37:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
你运来货物千万
为何忘了捎来她
相思的信


流畅的诗句！问好！
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
吟啸徐行
举人


Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 1336
Location: 中国安徽
吟啸徐行Collection
PostPosted: 2010-02-07 21:46:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
已开了头,就多写一点吧.
_________________
彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
晴天雨天
秀才


Joined: 20 Jan 2010
Posts: 213
Location: 杭州
晴天雨天Collection
PostPosted: 2010-02-08 00:26:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
表达清楚了呀!收工......
_________________
得到并不一定好，失去并不一定差！
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
阿依琼裙
秀才


Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
阿依琼裙Collection
PostPosted: 2010-02-08 01:22:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
我也感觉要是再延伸一下会更好～～
_________________
踏过废墟,走来
http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Display posts from previous:   
Emoticons
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
View more Emoticons
Page 1 of 1           View previous topic View next topic    
Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌    Post new topic   Reply to topic
Jump to:  


Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME