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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 12:17:43    Post subject: 迎庚寅新岁小品 - 向各位北美枫的朋友拜年 Reply with quote


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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 14:13:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄,你诗、书、画俱皆,醒神!
新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 16:56:57    Post subject: (原创)七律-虎和黄老师 Reply with quote

文/笑聊



群山啸罢傲苍穹,冷月弯钩映水中。

潜伏时时常忍受,巡回刻刻猎称雄。

长河扑跃惊天地,掠影漂移泣狩翁。

白额斑斓威自就,幽寻壑谷数君风。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 20:10:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

问黄老师新年好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 21:03:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白云兄欣赏,笑聊兄写山君诗更觉醒神!谢庆宏问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 21:49:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

迎庚寅新歲小品(詩書畫)
——向各位北美楓的朋友拜年

黃洋界

狂嘯聲威驚百獸,
山鳴落木震清穹。
蒼原勁草增豪氣,
壯士情懷唱大風。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 21:57:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

【040】黄洋界

迎庚寅新岁小品(诗书画)
——向各位北美枫的朋友拜年

狂啸声威惊百兽,
山鸣落木震清穹。
苍原劲草增豪气,
壮士情怀唱大风。

黄洋界,耀俊,加拿大多伦多。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 01:45:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢盈枝兄,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 04:46:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

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豪放之作,欣赏,惊百兽, 震清穹。 增豪气, 唱大风。句式上稍欠变化。

尽量广泛征求意见,以利于今后的创作。终于得到反馈。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 06:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 18:46:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢水湾筏者赐教,句式未求变,故行文板滞.
祝一品红新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 18:57:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

在前人的名篇中,偶尔也有句式雷同的情况——

登柳州城楼寄漳汀封连四州(柳宗元)

城上高楼接大荒,海天愁思正茫茫。
【惊风乱飐】【芙蓉——水】,
【密雨斜侵】【薜荔——墙】。
【岭树重遮】【千里——目】,
【江流曲似】【九迴——肠】。
共来百越文身地,犹自音书滞一乡。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-06 19:52:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

李兄博闻强识,钦佩!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 08:27:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师的诗、书、画俱佳,欣赏!学习!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 20:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢lulu赏读,祝新春好!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-10 04:37:48    Post subject: 赏读大作 Reply with quote

先生诗情豪迈、书法遒劲、大虫威猛!钦佩!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-10 08:06:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鼓励.祝先生春节安康吉祥!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-10 21:57:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝黄洋界先生春节愉快!阖家安康!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-11 01:55:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢李先生的祝贺,并祝李先生在虎年里,枝头更加硕果累累,
祝阖家安康吉祥!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-11 02:05:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候黄老师,给您拜年了!祝虎年虎虎生威,吉祥如意,阖家安康!!!
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