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感怀步韵
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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 09:15:15    Post subject: 感怀步韵 Reply with quote

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感怀步立中贤兄韵 2010 01 30            
遥遥昔恨举鞭迟 一路炎凉到暮时 
触目吟愁情未减 登峰无杖力难支 
几多夜色窗窗暗 不觉春风事事宜 
尽日望穷知己远 万般无奈剩深痴 
 其二 迭前韵   
秉烛何曾起步迟 春田半亩遇荒时 
蓬门奢幻三千客 弊帚珍藏四五支 
笔驱龙蛇皆蜷缩 歌嫌老少不咸宜 
浮生蓦近龙钟态 网伴谈心每绝痴 


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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 09:54:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

字字情深,句句委婉!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 18:16:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人时安, 谢赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 18:42:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

情真意切,读来感人!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 06:13:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

寒江雪影 wrote:
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感怀步立中贤兄韵 2010 01 30            
遥遥昔恨举鞭迟 一路炎凉到暮时 
触目吟愁情未减 登峰无杖力难支 
几多夜色窗窗暗 不觉春风事事宜 
尽日望穷知己远 万般无奈剩深痴 
 其二 迭前韵   
秉烛何曾起步迟 春田半亩遇荒时 
蓬门奢幻三千客 弊帚珍藏四五支 
笔驱龙蛇皆蜷缩 歌嫌老少不咸宜 
浮生蓦近龙钟态 网伴谈心每绝痴 


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敝帚自珍。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 06:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

寒江雪影 wrote:
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感怀步立中贤兄韵 2010 01 30            
遥遥昔恨举鞭迟 一路炎凉到暮时 
触目吟愁情未减 登峰无杖力难支 
几多夜色窗窗暗 不觉春风事事宜 
尽日望穷知己远 万般无奈剩深痴 
 其二 迭前韵   
秉烛何曾起步迟 春田半亩遇荒时 
蓬门奢幻三千客 弊帚珍藏四五支 
笔驱龙蛇皆蜷缩 歌嫌老少不咸宜 
浮生蓦近龙钟态 网伴谈心每绝痴 


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寒江诗友多保重!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 06:25:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

【041】寒江雪影

感怀步韵二首

感怀步立中贤兄韵
            
遥遥昔恨举鞭迟,一路炎凉到暮时。
触目吟愁情未减,登峰无杖力难支。
几多夜色窗窗暗,不觉春风事事宜。
尽日望穷知己远,万般无奈剩深痴。
 
其二 叠前韵
   
秉烛何曾起步迟,春田半亩遇荒时。
蓬门奢幻三千客,敝帚珍藏四五支。
笔驱龙蛇皆蜷缩,歌嫌老少不咸宜。
浮生蓦近龙钟态,网伴谈心每绝痴。

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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 06:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 08:01:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢笑聊先生, 白云闲人先生,qinghongh先生,李盈枝先生,承错爱,请时时指点以资勉励。
                       
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PostPosted: 2010-02-07 08:21:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

触目吟愁情未减 登峰无杖力难支 
几多夜色窗窗暗 不觉春风事事宜

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