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张思怡
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 21:31:42    Post subject: <<临别>> Reply with quote

临别你总喜欢说一句

:“希望你过得好”

面对你这句话

过去我常常是沉默的



犹疑在似即若离之间

我不能无视它们

不断地惊诧和恍惚

艰难地转身和靠近



有时你在

有时只有那抵抗 在走动



时间有着手掌的纹路

却流不动我们习惯的姿势

日渐臃肿的生活的腰身

让留恋的目光无法停站



我斜靠在站牌下

一只只人影落在你的视野里

拥挤 凌乱 慌张



今天这二月的晴天

低下了眼眉

更低了

我惊诧于自己对你说

:“希望你过得好。”


我和你总来不及说再见

2010/1/31




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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 21:40:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

口语很好,更显自然亲切
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张思怡
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PostPosted: 2010-02-01 11:08:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!语言随心而动.口语中蕴涵着更原始的生命感受!
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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 21:57:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感真实而自然的流动。
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