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詩的演出
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PostPosted: 2010-01-30 13:17:04    Post subject: 詩的演出 Reply with quote
詩的演出


你靜靜站上大舞台
穿得少，瘦的空曠

台下有隻狗
舉著神經機械學
立法院有人吧
忙著進出

座位上
一位婦女抗議
我回頭觀音
原來如此
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PostPosted: 2010-01-30 15:25:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
也是自有情趣
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PostPosted: 2010-01-30 20:58:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
瘦的空曠
————此句经典。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 00:54:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
Wink
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PostPosted: 2010-01-31 01:07:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
杯中冲浪 wrote:
瘦的空曠
————此句经典。


眼尖。
这就用到修辞的乘法，三米的五米，戏说。
其实还有重叠的效果。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 08:44:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
我觉得博弈的诗越来越机巧了。读着有趣
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PostPosted: 2010-02-03 21:23:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
我回頭觀音
原來如此


很有味道的诗歌，每次拜读都先哑然，后沉思～～
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