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鹧鸪天-醉眼濛濛淡看秋
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PostPosted: 2010-01-14 03:42:30    Post subject: 鹧鸪天-醉眼濛濛淡看秋 Reply with quote

(原创)鹧鸪天-醉眼濛濛淡看秋

文化·原创 2009-12-08 19:59 文/笑聊

月满西厢寂静楼,焚香沐浴抚琴悠。

相思一曲凭弦弄,呕血新歌唱和谋。

更漏断,听蛩啾。声声促织乱心筹。

无端痛饮杯三百,醉眼濛濛淡看秋。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-27 10:46:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

"焚香沐浴抚琴悠.相思一曲凭弦弄","无瑞痛飲杯三百,醉眼濛濛淡看秋". 笑聊兄既婉雅且豪放!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 06:53:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢白云兄点评!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 10:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!

更漏断

不是不可以用过时的词,譬如“举觞”之类,但还是尽量不用为好。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-29 03:09:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好前辈!说的是,晚学铭记了。更漏断,改为:深夜静。
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