陈欣 童生
Joined: 09 Jun 2006 Posts: 20 Location: 中国,山东 陈欣Collection |
Posted: 2006-06-12 05:14:13 Post subject: 父背弯弯 |
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父亲
渐瘦的脊背
弯成 弓
射落夕阳
残血涂天
裁剪片片云霞
积蓄女儿的嫁妆
弯成 伞
撑开一片爱的天空
在 我心里
硬化片片沼泽
履平儿子蹒跚的脚步
弯成 山
坚挺的脊背
托起明天的太阳
孙子甜甜的笑脸 |
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张村 秀才
Joined: 26 May 2006 Posts: 120 Location: 中国江西省德兴市 张村Collection |
Posted: 2006-06-12 05:50:02 Post subject: |
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父爱如山,提起来. _________________ 在诗里找生活,在生活里找乐. |
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尹士林 秀才
Joined: 26 May 2006 Posts: 416 Location: 河北保定易县中学 尹士林Collection |
Posted: 2006-06-12 16:00:40 Post subject: |
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弓!伞!山! _________________ 忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
河北易县中学 尹士林 |
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陈欣 童生
Joined: 09 Jun 2006 Posts: 20 Location: 中国,山东 陈欣Collection |
Posted: 2006-06-12 21:23:27 Post subject: |
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谢张村阅评. |
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陈欣 童生
Joined: 09 Jun 2006 Posts: 20 Location: 中国,山东 陈欣Collection |
Posted: 2006-06-12 21:24:09 Post subject: |
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问好,尹兄. |
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