白云闲人
探花
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 Posted: 2010-01-28 12:06:27 Post subject: 展望 |
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* * 展 望 * *
<调寄生查子>
风奏交响樂 ,
雪演銀裳舞 .
樂激凤和鳴 ,
舞励龙吟步 .
心輕显缤纷 ,
灑脱人生路 .
展目眺前途 ,
春风百花吐 !
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李盈枝
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Joined: 28 Nov 2009
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Location: 中国山东
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| Posted: 2010-01-28 17:21:01 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
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问好！欣赏形象思维之作。“诗要用形象思维，不能如散文那样直说。”“宋人多数不懂诗是要形象思维的，一反唐人规律，所以味同嚼蜡。”（毛泽东） |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-01-29 02:56:26 Post subject: |
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| 诚如李前辈所说，白云兄词作形象生动，功力可见！问好！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-01-29 11:23:23 Post subject: |
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謝謝李盈枝欣賞!
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-01-29 11:25:06 Post subject: |
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謝謝笑聊兄赏評!
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