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(原创)卜算子-思友
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 06:57:58    Post subject: (原创)卜算子-思友 Reply with quote

(原创)卜算子-思友

文化·原创 2009-11-21 18:22 文/笑聊

不想又常思,想却添烦恼。君貌时时脑海浮,刻刻心头绕。

翠柳舞春风,花艳蜂儿笑。与子鸡湖畔上行,至此情难了。



09.11.19于厦门

注:鸡湖,金鸡湖。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 07:02:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄如此重友情,让人敬重。“鸡湖”在哪里?望兄告知。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 07:05:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="米运刚"]笑聊兄如此重友情,让人敬重。“鸡湖”在哪里?望兄告知。[/quote]

问好米兄。鸡湖,金鸡湖。位于苏州市东南郊。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 07:13:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊兄!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 10:07:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

抒萱挥毫忆故友,情谊刻刻绕心头!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 10:31:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

【032】笑聊

卜算子•思友

不想又常思,想却添烦恼。君貌时时脑海浮,刻刻心头绕。
翠柳舞春风,花艳蜂儿笑。与子鸡湖畔上行,至此情难了。

注:鸡湖,金鸡湖。位于苏州市东郊。
09.11.19于厦门

卜算子 春游 (此词话游以铭君)

漫步曲径中, 执手鸡湖路。 柳绿桃红入眼来, 一派春光注 。
碧水浅鱼游 ,又见蜂寻舞。 最美人间画与词 ,千万和君住 。

笑聊,江苏无锡。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 10:33:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

【001】qinghongh(加拿大多伦多市)
【002】玉笛儿 (美国纽约州布法罗市)
【003】林锐彬 (新加坡)
【004】罗贤生(广东深圳)
【005】走马观花123(辽宁沈阳)
【006】水湾筏者(湖南)
【007】老山
【008】旧版书生(内蒙古)
【009】莹雪(辽宁)
【010】一字通
【011】颜如玉(英国伦敦)
【012】为萧云(湖北)
【013】君山楚女(江苏南京)
【014】成之 (黑龙江)
【015】周志桥(河北)
【016】女人嗑瓜子(陕西西安)
【017】张挥(新加坡)
【018】宁家珍(安徽)
【019】米运刚(四川)
【020】赖海雄
【021】白云闲人(加拿大)
【022】一品红(山东)
【023】泛舟四海(山东泰安)
【024】非非(河北石家庄)
【025】月下踏歌(四川成都)
【026】关山秋(江苏南京)
【027】梅园小茵(吉林长春)
【028】张从兴(新加坡)
【029】听雨轩主(北京)
【030】红叶笑西风(广东韶关)
【031】美人剑(湖北麻城)
【032】笑聊(江苏无锡)
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 10:35:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

卜算子

元高拭詞注:仙呂調。蘇軾詞,有〔缺月掛疏桐〕句,名《缺月掛疏桐》;秦湛詞,有〔極目煙中百尺樓〕句,名《百尺樓》;僧皎詞,有〔目斷楚天遙〕句,名《楚天遙》;無名氏詞,有〔蹙破眉峰碧〕句,名《眉峰碧》。

雙調四十四字,前後段各四句,兩仄韻

蘇軾
缺月掛疏桐。漏斷人初靜。時見幽人獨往來。縹緲孤鴻影。
◎◎◎⊙○ ◎●○○● ⊙●○○◎◎⊙ ◎●○○●
驚起卻回頭。有恨無人省。揀盡寒枝不肯棲。寂寞沙洲冷。
⊙◎◎⊙○ ◎●○○● ◎●○○◎◎⊙ ●●○○●

此調以此詞為正體,若石詞之多押兩韻,徐、黃、張、杜四詞之添字,皆變體也。蘇詞別首,前段第二句〔長憶吳山好〕,長字平聲,譜內據之。其餘可平可仄,悉參下詞。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-29 02:48:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白云兄!谢谢兄台雅评!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-29 02:50:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好前辈!谢谢前辈推荐!
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