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轮渡：灰尘中的舞蹈

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-01-26 22:19:38 Post subject: 轮渡：灰尘中的舞蹈

我再也无法掩饰自己的光芒了即便是最后一道光芒我也要真真切切地怒放一次春天里的花瓣啊是打我血管窜出的火苗我身后的季节是如何摇摇欲坠的我未来的日子何以黯然失色惟有我像星星一般在虚无的宇宙之际闪烁从什么时候开始，我如此痴迷于这光的形状仿佛燃烧的不是我我的非我已经乘风归去我的真我尚未出生，那为什么我如此痴迷于这个春天，这一月，这一日都是灰尘啊，就算最终都是灰尘我也要开作最灿烂的那一朵多少年复一年的渴望多少岁月流转的叹息今天，我要把自己嫁出去给我一束光，一颗麦粒给我一个春天般的许诺吧，你无论把我撒向哪里我都会生长，真的，只要给我一寸黄土我还会站起来，仿佛我的第一次降临 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2010-01-27 04:27:28 Post subject:

充沛着向上的力和灿烂的情绪，给人强烈的感染。这一节是我认为最好的一节。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

一品红
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Posted: 2010-01-27 06:23:49 Post subject:

富有感染力。 _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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Posted: 2010-01-27 08:14:02 Post subject:

无论把我撒向哪里我都会生长，真的，只要给我一寸黄土

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:10:54 Post subject:

感谢冲浪，一品红和sliu _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2010-01-27 23:11:30 Post subject:

有激情和理想,连灰尘也要灿烂开放,这就是奇迹. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

赵福治
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Posted: 2010-01-28 00:22:05 Post subject:

春天里的花瓣啊是打我血管窜出的火苗 ....内在的激情化为文字,问好兄.

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Posted: 2010-01-29 00:29:14 Post subject:

最近迷上了索朗旺姆。’光’ 让我一下想到這首歌。不相关，但附上吧。 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2nhUu2rSmlw _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-01-29 01:44:34 Post subject:

感谢点评和分享 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2010-01-29 19:28:01 Post subject:

怒放啊——！

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-30 21:25:55 Post subject:

只要给我一寸黄土我还会站起来，仿佛我的第一次降临凤凰涅磐。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2010-01-31 00:42:01 Post subject:

春天里的花瓣啊是打我血管窜出的火苗激情向上~

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Posted: 2010-02-03 22:23:42 Post subject:

生命因着这样的诗歌有了活泼的盼望～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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