SLIU
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 Posted: 2010-01-26 19:16:22 Post subject: 雾凇 |
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雾凇- （齐言新韵）
银绢织素裹玄冬
沃野千里霜花同
寒江朦朦锁浓雾
冰岸凌凌封古松
千姿雪柳挂银线
百态银松傲苍穹
万顷暮林梨花现
琼枝玉树霞映红 |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2010-01-26 19:34:29 Post subject: |
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| 这不就是李盈枝前辈论证的七言拗律吗?!欣赏了. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-01-26 19:40:37 Post subject: |
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| 很好的写景诗！刻画入微。 |
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SLIU
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| Posted: 2010-01-27 04:35:28 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
| 这不就是李盈枝前辈论证的七言拗律吗?!欣赏了. |
笑聊明眼。。多谢 。 |
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SLIU
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| Posted: 2010-01-27 04:36:41 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 很好的写景诗！刻画入微。 |
谢谢qinghongh评论。顺问好。 |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-01-27 09:48:02 Post subject: |
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景美诗婉!
問好!
_________________
诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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SLIU
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| Posted: 2010-01-27 23:25:23 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云闲人  |
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