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娃儿有时欠不理 (妞妞与娃儿 二)
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PostPosted: 2010-01-14 09:52:00    Post subject: 娃儿有时欠不理 (妞妞与娃儿 二) Reply with quote

娃儿欠不理的时候
妞妞会独坐雁湖踢水花
送霞飞
山顶的绛云,也窈窈的

娃讨了没趣
就闷坐云门吹笛
横山风
山下的炊烟,却袅袅的

娃歪歪扭扭的笛声
能在妞心里剪雨落梅
妞眼里灌满了湖水,软软的流

娃见了红霞 想妞
就摘很多很多酸枣
小口袋装满满的,奔山下走

娃用脆脆的枣
换妞甜甜的笑
和妞的一朵 百合的温柔

和好以后的妞妞
能乖巧好几天,哄娃乐
和好以后的娃儿
快乐的像一把狗尾巴草

:)))~~~~~~~~~

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PostPosted: 2010-01-14 19:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人想起易安一首词,抓了来:李清照《孤雁儿》

藤床纸帐朝眠起,说不尽、无佳思。沉香断续玉炉寒,伴我情怀如水。笛声三弄,梅心惊破,多少春情意。

小风疏雨萧萧地,又催下、千行泪。吹箫人去玉楼空,肠断与谁同倚?一枝折得,人间天上,没个人堪寄。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 16:13:46    Post subject: 你是不是有时候也欠不理? Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 17:41:55    Post subject: 原来这欠不理是这样理解的啊,可还有那么些理不清。 Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 07:38:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

这“孤雁儿”指的是诗盗?
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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 10:02:52    Post subject: 不是~ Reply with quote

是我。。。。哈哈哈
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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 11:01:27    Post subject: 真是你! Reply with quote

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是我。。。。哈哈哈

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PostPosted: 2010-02-02 12:53:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗,有人喊你回家做饭去~~~
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PostPosted: 2010-02-04 14:27:59    Post subject: 回家与作饭这两回事,通常不太搭在一起。 Reply with quote

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诗盗,有人喊你回家做饭去~~~

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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 11:38:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

是红袖喊的。诗盗得听话 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 13:23:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦后楼台高锁,酒醒帘幕低垂。去年春恨却来时。落花人独立,微雨燕双飞。
记得小苹初见,两重心字罗衣。琵琶弦上说相思。当时明月在,曾照彩云归。
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PostPosted: 2010-02-05 17:46:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩,上城读的深入~
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PostPosted: 2010-02-08 04:28:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

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恩,上城读的深入~



呵呵,就是莎翁也没写得这么好过,赶不过宋词 Smile
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PostPosted: 2010-02-10 10:29:28    Post subject: 真是真是。上城越来越会忽悠了跟俺们 Reply with quote

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