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七绝新年抒怀

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Posted: 2010-01-25 18:50:00 Post subject: 七绝新年抒怀

七绝新年抒怀文 / lulu 栖身南海繁华地，沥血呕心育幼枝。纵有乾坤多变故，不惊荣辱绘心诗。 _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒

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Posted: 2010-01-25 20:16:53 Post subject:

结句写出好心态,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2010-01-25 21:45:25 Post subject:

lulu新年快乐！

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Posted: 2010-01-25 22:00:14 Post subject:

lulu 回来了，问好新年

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Posted: 2010-01-26 09:57:04 Post subject:

不惊荣辱绘心诗,好句! 问好lulu ! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-01-26 19:37:39 Post subject:

我有个博友也叫lulu,问好朋友!

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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:32:11 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

结句写出好心态,问好!

谢黄老师夸奖，问好！
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:34:39 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

lulu新年快乐！

好久不见，庆宏老师新年好！
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:38:11 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

lulu 回来了，问好新年

好久不见，白水还是那么亲切，那么美，问好！
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:43:53 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

不惊荣辱绘心诗,好句!
问好lulu !

谢白云老师夸奖，好久不写诗，真不知该从哪里下笔了，望多指点，问好！
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Posted: 2010-01-27 20:58:54 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

我有个博友也叫lulu,问好朋友!

您好！我想彼lulu一定非此lulu，因为除了寒暑假，我几乎没时间上网，所以非常羡慕有时间的人。谢朋友光临，请多指点！
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Posted: 2010-01-27 21:55:17 Post subject:

lulu wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

我有个博友也叫lulu,问好朋友!

您好！我想彼lulu一定非此lulu，因为除了寒暑假，我几乎没时间上网，所以非常羡慕有时间的人。谢朋友光临，请多指点！

工作忙，多保重！

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Posted: 2010-01-30 05:39:56 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

lulu wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

我有个博友也叫lulu,问好朋友!

您好！我想彼lulu一定非此lulu，因为除了寒暑假，我几乎没时间上网，所以非常羡慕有时间的人。谢朋友光临，请多指点！

工作忙，多保重！

多谢庆宏老师关心！问好！
庆宏老师，您不但诗写得好，您又是历史专家，请多指点！
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Posted: 2010-01-30 12:43:05 Post subject:

五绝新年抒怀文 / lulu 栖身南海繁华地，沥血呕心育幼枝。纵有天地多变故，不惊荣辱绘心诗。认真数了一下，的确是28个字。看来工作太忙，难免计算有误。哈哈，问好！要想使之成为近体诗七绝，需要动点小手术——把“天地”改为“乾坤”。——“纵有（使）乾坤多变故”。

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Posted: 2010-02-03 07:31:50 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

五绝新年抒怀

文 / lulu

栖身南海繁华地，
沥血呕心育幼枝。
纵有天地多变故，
不惊荣辱绘心诗。

认真数了一下，的确是28个字。看来工作太忙，难免计算有误。哈哈，问好！
要想使之成为近体诗七绝，需要动点小手术——把“天地”改为“乾坤”。——“纵有（使）乾坤多变故”。

问好李老师！一看您的名字，马上想到“枝繁叶茂”，“郁郁葱葱”。。。您是格律诗专家，请多多指教！
不好意思，“天地”出律了，谢您的小手术！
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Posted: 2010-02-03 11:32:19 Post subject:

lulu wrote:

五绝新年抒怀
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李老师的意思是lulu笔误把七绝的抬头标成了五绝。

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Posted: 2010-02-07 07:21:38 Post subject:

lulu wrote:

李盈枝 wrote:

问好李老师！一看您的名字，马上想到“枝繁叶茂”，“郁郁葱葱”。。。您是格律诗专家，请多多指教！
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不好意思，

已改，多谢李老师！
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Posted: 2010-02-07 07:23:55 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

lulu wrote:

五绝新年抒怀
...

李老师的意思是lulu笔误把七绝的抬头标成了五绝。

不好意思，

已改，多谢庆宏老师！
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