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（原创）青玉案-水乡旧忆
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 04:19:22    Post subject: （原创）青玉案-水乡旧忆 Reply with quote
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杨花问尽天涯路。蝶蜂舞、花香吐。折柳依依相思处。水乡蕴绿，昔时民户。芦荻青青树。

戏嘻少小无猜语。装扮新郎把娇娶。旧事重提常怨苦。黯然春色，不堪回顾。恁燕巢还补。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 09:17:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
過去如烟飘渺渺,放眼前途方重要! 笑聊兄宽襟!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 02:28:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢白云闲人兄台劝慰!这词是怀旧之作.把心底深处的东西翻出来晒晒阳光.哦,让兄见笑了!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 04:02:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
旧作亦很美，晒晒阳光就更美了。欣赏！
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 05:21:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢米兄欣赏并雅评！
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 09:51:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊兄把心底深處的情丝照照阳光,很美!很浪漫缠绵!
每个人都有过去,都有值得怀念的往昔,这才叫生活.把怀念化作前進之动力,生活必呈現缤纷多彩!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 11:28:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊兄乃重情之人。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 19:04:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢白云兄鼓励!
谢谢庆宏兄雅誉!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-27 10:19:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
"杨花问尽天涯路.蝶蜂舞,花香吐." 起板便是一片柔美的感受! 有時回首一下往昔,也是一番情趣,也是人生的一种回味!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-28 06:50:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
白云兄说得不错，有时回忆一下过去，即便有些隐痛，感觉也是蛮好的。诚挚的谢谢白云兄的理解！谢谢雅评！
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