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新声新韵古风式七律
李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 08:02:52    Post subject: 新声新韵古风式七律 Reply with quote

隐逸梨山(米运刚)

寂寂午后倚小窗,
枝头乱叠腊月霜。
蝶扑柱石惊残梦,
蜂绕衣尾留余香。
野草侵阶绿半室,
苍松拂宇闹三江。
欲借云水浇甘果,
旧友新朋话曲觞。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 08:10:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

杜甫首创古风式七律(七言拗律),一千多年来,除晚唐几个诗人及苏轼、黄庭坚外,模仿者几乎没有。这种诗体,相对自由多了——不计平仄、粘对,只要中间两联对仗即可。
以上米运刚先生大作,与杜甫拗律在形式上的唯一区别,就是以现代语音取韵。
这种诗体,由于束缚较少,现代人写起来,更容易出现好作品。而旧的习惯势力,往往抵制这种杜甫首创的诗体。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 08:50:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

一般来说,如果只有一个拗句,属于“偶拗”,仍归入近体诗。杜甫的拗律,有的八句全部是拗句(古句),完全可以不考虑平仄、粘对。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 09:01:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

昼梦(拗体)

二月饶睡昏昏然,不独夜短昼分眠。
桃花气暖眼自醉,春渚日落梦相牵。
故乡门巷荆棘底,中原君臣豺虎边。
安得务农息战斗,普天无吏横索钱。

大历二年(767),56岁,夔州

——杜甫全篇古体的古风式七律。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-26 18:47:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢分享。。学习。。
诗歌种类的确很多,不只限于有平仄的近体。。
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