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温一壶月光下酒海
君山楚女
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 02:32:11    Post subject: 温一壶月光下酒海 Reply with quote

七律

温一壶月光下酒海


温馨荡漾沁心脾,
一曲新词弄燕泥。
壶煮三江杨柳醉,
月溶九寨色空迷。
光标随鼠惊天网,
下士乘风夺帅旗。
酒里文章深似海,
海涵犹在玉关西。


温一壶月光下酒:是一个网友的马甲,好生奇怪,故作七律相嬉戏。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 04:06:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

温馨荡漾沁心脾,
一曲新词弄燕泥。
欣赏君兄佳句!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 07:49:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

壶煮三江杨柳醉,
月溶九寨色空迷。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 09:12:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

"一曲新詞弄燕泥", 浪漫! 潇灑!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 09:20:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

【013】君山楚女

水调歌头•岁末

岁末翻新页,一切又从头。
年年伊始,眼底河汉遂时流。
老子无为而作,逝者扬波飞吻,相戏露华稠。
爆竹引梅笑,春在俏然游。

逢盛世,添虎气,学黄牛。
向来俯首,荷犁疾进趁风遒。
故国雄姿英发,华夏群星辉灿,天道论功酬。
织锦如涛涌,起舞上层楼。

满江红•货摊前拾趣

赶快来看,莫错过,清仓甩卖。快来呀,货真价实,雅高气派。对你心思就出手,留他钞票不生崽。这年头,享受要超前,添豪迈。
都有啥?你瞧呗。先看货,多担待。三五元一件,大开眼界。家里随时用得着,老婆不爽那才怪。别犹豫,既是主家人,须慷慨。


君山楚女,湖南雁城人,现居住南京。由一普通煤矿工人晋升为某国有特大型煤电企业高级管理人员。大学期间专攻现代经济管理,受业于美国著名华裔教授肖竟如先生,学成后回原企业从事经济管理直到退休。除自身专业外,尤爱好诗歌。先后获得各种奖项十余次。退休后仍然乐此不疲。

七律•温一壶月光下酒海

温馨荡漾沁心脾,一曲新词弄燕泥。
壶煮三江杨柳醉,月溶九寨色空迷。
光标随鼠惊天网,下士乘风夺帅旗。
酒里文章深似海,海涵犹在玉关西。

温一壶月光下酒,是一个网友的马甲,好生奇怪,故作七律相嬉戏。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-25 09:23:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

君山楚女 wrote:
七律

温一壶月光下酒海


温馨荡漾沁心脾,
一曲新词弄燕泥。
壶煮三江杨柳醉,
月溶九寨色空迷。
光标随鼠惊天网,
下士乘风夺帅旗。
酒里文章深似海,
海涵犹在玉关西。


温一壶月光下酒:是一个网友的马甲,好生奇怪,故作七律相嬉戏。
历年来我所见过的最好的“藏头诗”,完全看不到受藏头的限制。写的自然清新,明白如话却又情趣盎然。
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