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正宫朝天子松下别友人

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-12-04 05:39:12 Post subject: 正宫朝天子松下别友人

正宫朝天子松下别友人雾蒙蒙天低，风萧萧雨凄，落叶儿瑟瑟泣。酒盅儿冷冷，再难得暖意，却伤感烟瘴起。冰雪势头，垒沫豪利，原本是粪土浮气。一朝亲散，两朝友去，何如磐石松间趣。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-12-04 09:19:03 Post subject:

曲韵萧萧兮,离情别意凄! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-12-07 13:05:08 Post subject:

“冰雪势头，垒沫豪利，原本是粪土浮气。一朝亲散，两朝友去，何如磐石松间趣。” 看破尘世空花，留得磐石松趣。

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Posted: 2009-12-24 19:00:05 Post subject:

正宫朝天子松下别友人 2009-12-04 05:41 雾蒙蒙天低，风萧萧雨凄，落叶儿瑟瑟泣。酒盅儿冷冷，再难得暖意，却伤感烟瘴起。冰雪势头，垒沫豪利，原本是粪土浮气。一朝亲散，两朝友去，何如磐石松间趣。 ----米兄曲调，深得元曲韵味，令人手把畅诵不釋！ _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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Posted: 2009-12-30 11:36:57 Post subject:

冰雪势头，垒沫豪利，原本是粪土浮气大气之笔

岸柳
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Posted: 2010-01-08 01:26:44 Post subject:

凄婉！

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Posted: 2010-01-08 04:47:52 Post subject:

【049】[正宫]•朝天子•松下别友人(米运刚) 雾蒙蒙天低，风萧萧雨凄，落叶儿瑟瑟泣。酒盅儿冷冷，再难得暖意，却伤感烟瘴起。冰雪势头，垒沫豪利，原本是粪土浮气。一朝亲散，两朝友去，何如磐石松间趣。

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:24:26 Post subject:

“曲韵萧萧兮,离情别意凄!”多谢白云兄！白云兄：久违了！近来可好？

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:26:02 Post subject:

谢谢冰清先生品评！预祝先生虎年吉祥！

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:28:07 Post subject:

“米兄曲调，深得元曲韵味，令人手把畅诵不釋！”方天兄谬赞了！兄的诗词让人耳目一新，在下学习了！

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:29:39 Post subject:

“大气之笔”白水君夸奖了，实在不敢当！预祝新年好！

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:30:57 Post subject:

“凄婉！” 谢谢岸柳兄！

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Posted: 2010-01-23 08:32:20 Post subject:

谢谢李盈枝先生阅读！

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