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壶口印象
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 01:52:28    Post subject: 壶口印象 Reply with quote

一.
这些活蹦乱跳的东西
我是抱不住的,该撒手的就撒手吧
一撒就是长河的落日
那落下的感觉,这一辈子,我是无法再重温了
再那么温柔地抱起
这些山颠海倒的感觉
我是再也提不起来了,要是一提起呀
黄河便会倒流
那一泻千里的感觉,你又如何挡得住呢

二.
沉重的东西渐渐变轻
哪些轻柔的长着小翅膀的东西,我称之为雾
我总是说我行走在雾里
其实,我是滑翔在水面之上
水面之下空荡荡没头没脑的,这怎么可能呢
世界什么时候颠倒了,颠倒了的世界
沉重的东西愈来愈沉重
一滴水已经不堪负荷
忽然崩溃的一滴水,我已经无法承载

三.
我是如何流浪到这里的
我把丰腴的肌肉都奉献给了天上飞的鹰
我是如何散落黄土高坡的
山川业已停止歌唱
我依然拉动着一根琴弦
仿佛拉动着自己的脊椎
我愈拉愈紧我愈拉愈快
就算是秦川黄河都无法制止我
我愈拉愈快我愈拉愈紧
秦川忽然崩断
黄河呢,黄河呢,你怎么可能就这样跳了下去

四.
大漠到了这里忽然变小了
小到了一匹骆驼
小到了一把炊烟
大漠到这里忽然拐了一个弯
如果大漠到这里能再拐一个弯该多好呀
该多好呀世界就直了
直了的世界好像是某个人的一支孤独的烟
长长的朝着天际抒出了一口长长的气
只有我还是弯的,这个世界上,只有我弯得像是
一匹孤独的骆驼,我的弯愈来愈重
天上有半个月亮,我的弯愈来愈大
黄河呀黄河,你看我的弯
我的弯快要够着天上了


五.
黄河倒提着一把水壶
来过壶口的人都知道
水壶里面装的全是黄水
偶尔也加了冰块
但他们都错了,那哪里是黄水呀
那壶里装的,全是酒,是千年酿就的老了又老了的老黄酒
现在,那壶就在我的背上背着
我口渴了,就喝上一口
我想家了,就喝上一口
你不信? 得,你也来一口吧
你瞧瞧你不胜酒力吧
这一口,已经把你醉倒在异国,
醉倒的你依然念着,壶口,壶口
其实,壶口就在你的心里
壶口就在你的梦里,装着





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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 05:09:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

三.
我是如何流浪到这里的
我把丰腴的肌肉都奉献给了天上飞的鹰
我是如何散落黄土高坡的
山川业已停止歌唱
我依然拉动着一根琴弦
仿佛拉动着自己的脊椎
我愈拉愈紧我愈拉愈快
就算是秦川黄河都无法制止我
我愈拉愈快我愈拉愈紧
秦川忽然崩断
黄河呢,黄河呢,你怎么可能就这样跳了下去


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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 21:43:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

只有我还是弯的,这个世界上,只有我弯得像是
一匹孤独的骆驼,我的弯愈来愈重
天上有半个月亮,我的弯愈来愈大
黄河呀黄河,你看我的弯
我的弯快要够着天上了




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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 22:16:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水,你前面的图片我看不到
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 22:36:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

你是说pdf 还是回帖?
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PostPosted: 2010-01-23 22:48:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

good now, baidu's pictures are only for its own users...
thanks
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 01:04:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

弯,可以直,也可以成圆。。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 09:26:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

到了国外,真是语境有不同,我看了白水写壶口又看了您写的,觉得实用性都很强,但是,在实用中,悲苦并不好表达,甚至与实用对立。但从作者角度,在一个语境里只能抒发,这其实是与主观有矛盾的客观,这矛盾恰恰是实用。大量的思考需要匀称,在客观抒发中,又怎么来表现主观的棱角,这很难,很难了。问好岛兄,新年快乐!!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-24 14:29:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这样的句子:

一匹孤独的骆驼,我的弯愈来愈重
天上有半个月亮
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PostPosted: 2010-02-03 23:52:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

真真是一泻千里的畅快~~
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