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暗香·冬梅
成之
童生


Joined: 26 Jul 2008
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Location: 中国大庆
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PostPosted: 2010-01-20 01:41:58    Post subject: 暗香·冬梅 Reply with quote

  寒山一脉。已丛林尽染,川原皆白。谁把冰心,植入孤芳一丝魄?乐在悬崖峭壁,开自主、不求攀摘。似丹青、素点红妆,千古自然色。
  南北,孰仲伯?任果老八千,洞宾三百。可曾选择,甘作前驱为春帅?尝遍人间冷暖,却未肯、关心田宅。指广厦、天地若,只嫌太窄!


  注:古代神话传说中有长生不老的“八仙”,张果老和吕洞宾为其代表人物。见明·吴元泰《东游记》。
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李盈枝
状元


Joined: 28 Nov 2009
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Location: 中国山东
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PostPosted: 2010-01-20 05:11:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

【014】成之

贺新郎•致网友

老有余生乐。醉穹斋、春花秋月,闲云野鹤。只为夕阳无限好,不肯光阴挥霍。骋遐思、大川广漠。南北行吟情未尽,把古今翻阅知其略。诗三昧,苦求索。  
酒香何惧门罗雀。偶时来、二三知己,杯觥交错。更向天涯邀笔友,彼此交心网络。敲平仄、趣同斟酌。昔日曾经兰亭会,问今朝谁与山阴约?桃园义,金兰诺。

注:东晋时,王羲之、谢安、孙绰等四十一人,以诗酒聚会于山阴之兰亭。王羲之作《兰亭集序》为记。

霓裳中序第•雪松

乾坤都一色,山水苍茫难与拆,万里川原皆白。看覆野琼田,幕空银壁,云低天窄。吼朔风、寒雀无迹。迷穹宇,人间混沌,无法辨南北。
  松柏,岁寒一脉。翠欲滴、雪魂冰魄,盈盈闲靓堪摘。遥问东君,远思南客,返途知几百?切须记、当初阡陌。唯恐似,乌衣巷口,归燕觅新宅。

七绝•题图《雪梅》

孤寂何曾妒众芳?洁身习性自疏狂。
纵然妆素不如雪,笑洒冰天一缕香。

七绝•题图《红梅》

一花独放百花眠,笑在冰封腊月天。
能否惊春非本意,自由自在雪中仙。

七律•腊梅

一花独唱百花眠,唤醒东风二月天。
硬骨难描天下笔,柔枝不负雪中仙。
寂寥冰国争先色,欢乐春园让后贤。
待到满山佳丽笑,子孙累累颂丰年。

暗香•冬梅

寒山一脉。已丛林尽染,川原皆白。谁把冰心,植入孤芳一丝魄?乐在悬崖峭壁,开自主、不求攀摘。似丹青、素点红妆,千古自然色。
南北,孰仲伯?任果老八千,洞宾三百。可曾选择,甘作前驱为春帅?尝遍人间冷暖,却未肯、关心田宅。指广厦、天地若,只嫌太窄!

成之,来自中国大庆。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-01-20 10:16:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

"开自主、不求攀摘." 道盡梅高節!
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笑聊
探花


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PostPosted: 2010-01-21 04:00:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="成之"][size=18]  寒山一脉。已丛林尽染,川原皆白。谁把冰心,植入孤芳一丝魄?乐在悬崖峭壁,[color=red]开自主、不求攀摘。似丹青、素点红妆,千古自然色。[/color]  南北,孰仲伯?任果老八千,洞宾三百。可曾选择,甘作前驱为春帅?[color=red]尝遍人间冷暖,却未肯、关心田宅[/color]。指广厦、天地若,只嫌太窄! [/size]

[size=9]  注:古代神话传说中有长生不老的“八仙”,张果老和吕洞宾为其代表人物。见明·吴元泰《东游记》。[/size][/quote]
[color=black]立意自然,境界高远!学习了。[/color]
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-01-21 04:04:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

开自主、不求攀摘。似丹青、素点红妆,千古自然色
尝遍人间冷暖,却未肯、关心田宅。

立意自然、境界高远!
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君山楚女
秀才


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PostPosted: 2010-01-21 16:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

果如笑聊兄所言!学习!
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