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七绝·题图《雪梅》
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PostPosted: 2010-01-17 16:48:07    Post subject: 七绝·题图《雪梅》 Reply with quote

孤寂何曾妒众芳?洁身习性自疏狂。
纵然妆素不如雪,笑洒冰天一缕香。



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PostPosted: 2010-01-17 17:33:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 异乡梅
--远离故土的奋斗者

枝梅辗转到天涯,历尽寒辛始有芽。
雪冻风催香犹在,身披秀色傲春花。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 00:28:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝 异乡梅
--远离故土的奋斗者

枝梅辗转到天涯,
历尽寒辛始有芽。
雪冻风催香犹在,——仄仄平平平平仄
身披秀色傲春花。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 00:33:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

【014】成之

贺新郎•致网友

老有余生乐。醉穹斋、春花秋月,闲云野鹤。只为夕阳无限好,不肯光阴挥霍。骋遐思、大川广漠。南北行吟情未尽,把古今翻阅知其略。诗三昧,苦求索。  
酒香何惧门罗雀。偶时来、二三知己,杯觥交错。更向天涯邀笔友,彼此交心网络。敲平仄、趣同斟酌。昔日曾经兰亭会,问今朝谁与山阴约?桃园义,金兰诺。

注:东晋时,王羲之、谢安、孙绰等四十一人,以诗酒聚会于山阴之兰亭。王羲之作《兰亭集序》为记。

霓裳中序第•雪松

乾坤都一色,山水苍茫难与拆,万里川原皆白。看覆野琼田,幕空银壁,云低天窄。吼朔风、寒雀无迹。迷穹宇,人间混沌,无法辨南北。
  松柏,岁寒一脉。翠欲滴、雪魂冰魄,盈盈闲靓堪摘。遥问东君,远思南客,返途知几百?切须记、当初阡陌。唯恐似,乌衣巷口,归燕觅新宅。

七绝•题图《雪梅》

孤寂何曾妒众芳?洁身习性自疏狂。
纵然妆素不如雪,笑洒冰天一缕香。

成之,来自中国大庆。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 06:16:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢关注,问好李版!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 11:36:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
七绝 异乡梅
...


谢谢李兄指出!我又犯川音之误,把“犹”字读成仄声了。

现改如下:

七绝 异乡梅
--远离故土的奋斗者

枝梅辗转到天涯,历尽寒辛始有芽。
雪冻风催香韵在,身披秀色傲春花。

李兄看如何?
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 13:28:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
七绝 异乡梅
...


谢谢李兄指出!我又犯川音之误,把“犹”字读成仄声了。
...
哈哈,很好!“领头羊”的要重韵味,质量第一。问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 16:39:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
七绝 异乡梅
...


谢谢李兄指出!我又犯川音之误,把“犹”字读成仄声了。
...
哈哈,很好!“领头羊”的要重韵味,质量第一。问好!


五绝 题梅花

迎风伴雪开,梅送暗香来。
傲骨寒中立,题诗好素材。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 20:50:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
李盈枝 wrote:
七绝 异乡梅
...


谢谢李兄指出!我又犯川音之误,把“犹”字读成仄声了。
...
哈哈,很好!“领头羊”的要重韵味,质量第一。问好!


五绝 题梅花
...
墙角数枝梅,凌寒独自开。
遥知不是雪,为有暗香来。
虽然还不抵王安石的,却也另有新意。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 20:54:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

五绝 题梅花

迎风伴雪开,梅送暗香来。
傲骨寒中立,题诗好素材。

另,咏物诗当避题,暂且易“梅”为“时”吧。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-18 21:48:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
五绝 题梅花
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谢李兄!问好!
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