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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 16:32:21    Post subject: 仙侣一半儿 Reply with quote

(原创)仙吕一半儿题叶曼叔成扇《芭蕉铜箫》

文化·原创 2009-12-25 21:04



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芭蕉树下抚弦音,箫管悠悠相和琴。风抹水流衫皱襟。眼波频,(斜,失误应押韵 改频,致谦哦)一半儿声情一半儿心。



注:叶曼叔,民国时期人,沪上名画家。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:16:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•寄情二首(一)

寄情虚把彩笺缄,
排砌偷将底句搀,
隔帘怪他娇眼馋。
话儿斩,
一半儿佯 羞一半儿敢。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:17:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•寄情二首(二)

臂销闲把玉纤掐,
髻袒慵拈金凤插,
粉淡偷临青镜搽。
劣冤家,
一半儿真情 一半儿假。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:18:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•落花

酒边红树碎珊瑚,
楼下名姬坠绿珠,
枝上翠阴啼鹧鸪。
谩嗟吁,
一半儿因风一半儿雨。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:19:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•酒醒

罗衣香渗酒初阑,
锦帐烟消月又残,
翠被梦回人正寒。
唤蛮蛮,
一半儿依随一半儿懒。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:20:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•秋日宫词
  
花边娇月静妆楼,
叶底沧波冷翠沟,
池上好风闲御舟。
可怜秋,
一半儿芙蓉一半儿柳。 

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:22:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•梅边

枝横翠竹暮寒生,
花淡纱窗残月明,
人倚画楼羌笛声。
恼诗情,
一半儿清香一半儿影。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:22:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•情
  
数层秋树隔雕檐,
万朵晴云拥玉蟾,
几缕夜香穿绣帘。
等潜潜,
一半儿门开一半儿掩。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:23:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•野桥酬耿子春
  
海棠香雨污吟袍,
薜荔空墙闲酒瓢,
杨柳晓风凉野桥。
放诗豪,
一半儿行书一半儿草。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:24:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•赏牡丹
  
锦裙吹上翠云枝,
绿酒争传白玉卮,
皓齿慢歌金缕词。
牡丹时,
一半儿姚黄一半儿紫。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:24:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•苍崖禅师退隐
  
柳梢香露点荷衣,
树杪斜阳明翠微,
竹外浅沙涵钓矶。
乐忘归,
一半儿青山一半儿水。

——张可久
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:25:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•题情

鸦瓴般水鬓似刀裁,
小颗颗芙蓉花额儿窄。
待不梳妆怕娘左猜。
不免插金钗,
一半儿蓬松一半儿歪。

——王和卿
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:26:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•寻梅

寻香曾到葛仙台,
踏雪今临和靖宅,
横斜数枝僧寺侧。
动吟怀,
一半儿衔春一半儿开。

——赵善庆
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:26:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•题情

多情多绪小冤家,
迤逗得人来憔悴煞,
说来的话先瞒过咱。
怎知他,
一半儿真实一半儿假。

——关汉卿
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:27:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•题情

自将杨柳品题人,
笑拈花枝比较春,
输与海棠三四分。
再偷匀,
一半儿胭脂一半儿粉。

——查德卿
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:28:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•题情

云鬟雾鬓胜堆鸦,
浅露金莲簌绛纱,
不比等闲墙外花。
骂你个俏冤家,
一半儿难当一半儿耍。

——关汉卿
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:29:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

【仙吕】一半儿•题情

月下哀求不点头,
花前戏弄像玩猴。
气傻他人就上楼。
笑回眸,
一半儿刁蛮一半儿柔。

2009-12-28凌晨1:30草就
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 20:36:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

【一半儿】小令兼用。即[忆王孙],末句定格嵌入两个“一半儿”。曲中多用此格,用[忆王孙]整个甚少。

×平×仄仄平平△,
×仄平平平去平△,
×仄×平平去平△。
厶平平△,
一半儿平平一半儿上△。

——该《北曲曲谱简编》仅供参考,并不完全符合元代散曲家的创作实际。需要关机咪西早餐了,以后再与先生切磋。顺便问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 22:23:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

李盈枝 wrote:
【仙吕】一半儿•赏牡丹
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七绝 洛阳牡丹

牡丹华贵沁芬芳, 风骨铮铮藐女皇。
国色天香酬百姓, 一朝绽放古都香。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 23:07:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="李盈枝"]【一半儿】小令兼用。即[忆王孙],末句定格嵌入两个“一半儿”。曲中多用此格,用[忆王孙]整个甚少。

×平×仄仄平平△,
...[/quote]
首句押平韵外,下两句可押仄韵.末句谱上押上声,但也可押平声。第五句应押韵,此处失误,已改。谱见:元人小令格律-唐圭璋著。谢谢交流!
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