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临江仙-题国色天香图
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PostPosted: 2010-01-05 18:27:02    Post subject: 临江仙-题国色天香图 Reply with quote
（原创）临江仙-题国色天香图

文化·原创 2009-11-24 19:23

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玉笛悠悠吹翠柳，荷塘如镜光明。和风轻赋短歌行。素衣飘忽忽，喉啭客颇惊。

凤眼秋波勤暗送，兰花秀指盈盈。滴娇娇水样怜生。恐言难论说，倾国又倾城。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-05 19:12:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
滴娇——娇水样——怜生

问好！此句似乎有待润色，馀欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-05 20:54:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好!这句应读为:滴娇娇-水样-怜生.如前辈有好句,望不吝赐教!
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PostPosted: 2010-01-05 22:09:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
【042】临江仙•题国色天香图（笑聊）

玉笛悠悠吹翠柳，荷塘如镜光明。和风轻赋短歌行。素衣飘忽忽，喉啭客颇惊。
凤眼秋波勤暗送，兰花秀指盈盈。滴娇娇水样怜生。恐言难论说，倾国又倾城。
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PostPosted: 2010-01-06 18:17:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
[quote="李盈枝"]【042】临江仙•题国色天香图（笑聊）
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诚挚地向前辈问好!感谢前辈推荐本文!
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