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《我已经无药可救》

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Posted: 2010-01-04 09:10:17 Post subject: 《我已经无药可救》

《乌鸦回巢了》文/大侠仙子乌鸦，回巢了我还在崖壁之上疗伤那支有毒的箭簇，仍在弦上半弯冷月，是我的弓爱已成空我随时准备射出自己点亮一盏心灯《失梦》春风，从我的生命里呼出吸入的，全是严冬我敲响体内所有的骨头让绝壁发出些悲鸣失梦，将命中所有的疼痛清空在黑夜奏响太阳的嘶鸣子期，深陷绝境何日看到我孤独的行踪《今晚》脚边的美人鱼，妖娆多情无脊的蜉蝣，扯断衣袖一颗水草在海底诅咒花花依然在那些吹起的泡沫里苦读圣经一根干柴，拔动，内心的黑暗所有的剧情金光闪闪隔岸观火，今晚看一座天守阁燃尽的过程《我已经无药可救》早就成为陌生乌鸦还在虚拟的阁楼里发疯无法对你说出，一只苍鹰的悲情烛火，已经伸出手臂抚摸了湿地的天空我的翎羽即将燃烧所有的尊严，焚烬，于海的上空三十五年脱喙换羽成灰，我已经无药可救

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Posted: 2010-01-05 20:33:36 Post subject:

这几首诗歌很有灵气，自然，超脱

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Posted: 2010-01-06 00:27:34 Post subject:

有整体感,一气呵成,情绪把握较好. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2010-03-20 03:08:36 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这几首诗歌很有灵气，自然，超脱

谢谢，迟复为歉！遥祝春安！

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Posted: 2010-03-20 03:09:33 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

有整体感,一气呵成,情绪把握较好.

谢谢，迟复为歉！遥祝春安！

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Posted: 2010-03-22 19:16:00 Post subject:

精短的一组！问好！

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Posted: 2010-03-23 08:48:57 Post subject:

根瑶 wrote:

精短的一组！问好！

问好根瑶，遥祝春安！

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Posted: 2010-03-23 17:06:42 Post subject:

乌鸦那个不错~

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Posted: 2010-03-23 21:18:02 Post subject:

好读，提上

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Posted: 2010-03-28 03:51:21 Post subject: ，

七小姐 wrote:

乌鸦那个不错~

谢谢七小姐，问好！

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Posted: 2010-03-28 03:52:29 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

好读，提上

谢谢子花，春安！

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Posted: 2010-03-28 07:08:15 Post subject:

情感炽热`内心丰富~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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