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白水
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Posted: 2009-12-30 21:50:45 Post subject: 琴为何物？

琴为何物？题记：得知她病，远方的他只说了5个字… … 有人说，爱是深深庭院一枚酸酸甜甜的浆果有人说，爱是鸿雁传书，一纸浓浓的相思。你却和弦于天籁，天籁无声静谧的夜晚，紧束的长发散了散乱成匍匐的溪流键盘轻轻，你轻轻地敲开大山的胸膛： “不要怕，我在。” 幽谷深沉，深沉的幽谷回旋着沉沉的共鸣。我蓦然回首看川前瀑布，竖琴而立一曲清空跌宕怎一架千古瑶琴，如是音韵？

湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2009-12-31 03:37:31 Post subject:

问个好,来自2009年岁末的真诚祝福,新年快乐.

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-12-31 06:31:51 Post subject:

静谧的夜晚，紧束的长发散了散乱成匍匐的溪流 ——这长发散的很好，很有风情。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-31 09:04:02 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦 wrote:

问个好,来自2009年岁末的真诚祝福,新年快乐.

问好湮雨，等你的新诗。新年快乐. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-31 09:11:43 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

静谧的夜晚，紧束的长发散了
...

问好冲浪，绝一首，晕你一下 Wink

杯中冲浪添新酒，墨海文山醉异乡
莫叹风情长发散，宁学人子敢担当

新年快乐 Very Happy

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-12-31 15:36:18 Post subject: ！

问候新年！祝福吉祥！！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-12-31 19:40:45 Post subject:

琴为何物？有人说，爱是深深庭院一枚酸酸甜甜的浆果静谧的夜晚，紧束的长发散了散乱成匍匐的溪流川前瀑布，竖琴而立一曲清空跌宕怎一架千古瑶琴，如是音韵？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-12-31 20:11:00 Post subject:

修改以后，指向更加明确，尤其小题记，画龙点睛。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-31 20:28:20 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

问候新年！祝福吉祥！！

问好少君，愿你阖家新的一年万事顺意。

白水
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Posted: 2009-12-31 21:08:54 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

修改以后，指向更加明确，尤其小题记，画龙点睛。 Very Happy

怪你自己不读完，我只好把后记提到顶上了 Wink

谢谢你的建议，我把诗歌去了两行并减了个别字。看来诗歌的确要尽量减少多余的东西。

这是一对夫妻间真实的事。我却以为这种情感不仅限于夫妻，谁说朋友和亲友之交不是如此？无论爱情，亲情，还是友情，花前月下，酒肆餐厅，天伦之乐固然温馨，欢乐，而患难时的信任，担当与安慰却更加真实，更加难能可贵。这种无私的大爱可以让倒下去的东西站起来，就像高山，瀑布，，，，，，

年末了，还有一个小时45分钟，Toronto 就要跨入2010年。借此回帖，写下2009最后的感悟。

江南雨
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Posted: 2010-01-02 07:53:01 Post subject:

真诚祝福,新年快乐. _________________ 陕西姜华

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2010-01-03 13:10:07 Post subject:

琴从来无物，但交出了全部，它无道之声，发自内心。

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Posted: 2010-01-03 14:47:12 Post subject:

那得看是哪个牌子的。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

hepingdao
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Posted: 2010-01-03 17:04:00 Post subject:

竖琴而立我也来听音，天籁哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:01:52 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

真诚祝福,新年快乐.

问好江南雨，新年快乐。
我们这里还是漫天大雪 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:05:19 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

琴从来无物，但交出了全部，它无道之声，发自内心。

问好77,谢谢理解，愿你新年更漂亮 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:06:38 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

那得看是哪个牌子的。

博士牌

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:08:05 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

竖琴而立
我也来听音，天籁哦

兔子耳朵

安红红
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Posted: 2010-01-03 22:10:56 Post subject:

过的真快~一年就这样过去了~ 琴为何物？是人活进琴声里，还是琴活到心深处？是弹琴的人，还是被琴弹奏？问好白水~新年新气象~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

白水
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Posted: 2010-01-05 23:15:03 Post subject:

问好红红，新年快乐

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